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Posted: 8 years ago
Kuch cheezein jo apke whem o gumaan mein na hoon woh jayen toh jo khushi hoti hai wisa he mujhe ehsaas hua...Aisa hi mami ke kirdar ko parh kar laga mujhe...nihayat hi umdah update. ab naye baab ke leye bechani se intezaar rehga. Aor us pal ka bhi jab Arnav ko pata chalega k Khushi hi Nikhil ki mother hai... Mulaqaton ka silsila chal nikla hai humein or kya chaheye. Behtreen update. shukriya
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Posted: 8 years ago
nice update ..waiting for arshi meet...update soon pls
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Posted: 8 years ago
Mazza aa gaya...Payal jiji ke dimag ki batti jali...
Feeling bad for AAKASH poor fellow,but Payal is trying to sort it😉

Can't wait for next update plzzz update sooon👍🏼
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Posted: 8 years ago
This may sound mean but I found this chappy short may be coz I was scrolling down and down and down for Arshi to come across as Nikhil's mom and Annav uncle, didn't happen .

But the twist I loved here was Payal playing Cupid, especially when she said no to Akash's proposal. Ain't she got brains here smother the roadblocks in her way (in a good way) and smoother the way for Akash and herself.

Thanks for showing Akash using gym why should only Arnav has that proprietary, no offense just mentioning. And another part I loved was Mami actually accepting Payal for Akash coz she is who he wants. I loved her advice that they can go to her is she can't come and even considering talking to nani. Cool.

And now what does Anjali told her daughter? Is she been told to play Cupid here? For getting her Chote on her family for good?

Only if they know that once Arnav knows about Nikhil's lineage, he ain't going anywhere.

What I wanna read next is a good show down between Arshi, and Arnav's POV.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Loved the update!!!
Cannot wait for them to see each other...waiting for the reaction
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Posted: 8 years ago
Because of khushi-Arnav Payal said no to akash? And now akash is heartbroken
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Posted: 8 years ago
Intrigued more while u read the White Rainbow, but I flattened on this story, which making sudden twists making story higher so on. Will start to comment on from my favourites of kids... Ahhh, what can I say about Aashu, her talks r too witty and absolutely loving that. Nikhil, he came out if shell after meets his di,  his actions look s like arnav, atlast he is his son!!! Then, shyam is still in mystery with rukmani. I think he giving positive vibrants towards her. Waiting for story unfold and can't wait for trip incidents.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Waiting to see how arnav will do after he know dat nikhil is his son pls make relized fast
Awesome update
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Posted: 8 years ago
Their meet is so close now. How is it going to happen? I'm so excited about that. The realization and the aftermath. I hope it'll happen in the next chapter cause I can't wait anymore...
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Posted: 8 years ago
I really can't wait for the next part. 
I m so excited for their meeting. 
Please update soon.