Destined Zombies#17:Baatcutter,Butterfly Kiss,Fireflies&Stars[IO] - Page 51

Angel

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Posted: 8 years ago

Which incident u were talking about ?? Tell me if u feel like okay

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Shahnaz

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Endurance
Which incident u were talking about ?? Tell me if u feel like okay

Worried. Horrified. Scared. All because he knew he was nearly close to lose her. At least the circumstance gave him the feel - the bitter truth slapped right across his face - about how important she had been; and also about his stupidity towards her. His negligence towards her - her wants, her needs, her feelings. Nothing concerned him - nothing at all. He had just been a reckless person to look at anything beyond his interest. He wasn't looking at anything beyond his career, his lifestyle and his requirements from life.

He had neglected her without any doubt - now he was clear about that fact. But today he could even see what it had been for her. She had given in everything of hers' for this man who had nothing to take care of her needs. He had exploited her for his demands yet not been able to look into those eyes that craved for his concern and care. His love.

^This Part. Though I had made a few changes from the original one. But still this is a bit disturbing. Readers might take it the other way.

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Angel

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Posted: 8 years ago

Let's keep urs only ..or .

Medcezir of Fear.

how's it ??

Medcezir is a turkish word it means TIDE in English ..

I know not that great 😆 😛 Edited by Endurance - 8 years ago

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Shahnaz

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Posted: 8 years ago

In reality. People get blinded and things change in relationships. Love fades away - or at least is lost. Because there's a chase for materialist needs and desires of the individuals.

And when one is on the verge of losing someone - there is always this self-accusing been done - no matter what! Whether at fault or not.. one does blame himself or herself for what wrong happens to the other. That's how reality works. But fanfic readers might not understand this ideology. They might not get this and things go in all wrong directions then.

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Shahnaz

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Endurance
Let's keep urs only ..or .

Medcezir of Fear.

how's it ??

Medcezir is a turkish word it means TIDE in English ..

I know not that great 😆 😛

That sounds interesting. New.. and pretty much attractive. I will keep that 😃

Thank you :)

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Shahnaz

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Posted: 8 years ago

One Shot: Medcezir of Fear!

Have fun! :)

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Shahnaz

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Posted: 8 years ago

PMs for this won't be sent. Will be done later when I send PMs for bulk updates.

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Angel

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Posted: 8 years ago

Again power cut :( I hate it..

Really is it that good ??

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Shahnaz

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Endurance
Again power cut :( I hate it..

Really is it that good ??

Posted already!

Yes, it is good. Since I wanted something catchy.. and this Medcezir is definitely curiosity-puller. So eyes do land on it. Toh I took it.

Anyways Thanks a ton for the help. And I love you!

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Angel

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: -shenz-
In reality. People get blinded and things change in relationships. Love fades away - or at least is lost. Because there's a chase for materialist needs and desires of the individuals.
And when one is on the verge of losing someone - there is always this self-accusing been done - no matter what! Whether at fault or not.. one does blame himself or herself for what wrong happens to the other. That's how reality works. But fanfic readers might not understand this ideology. They might not get this and things go in all wrong directions then.

This is TRUE.. and I won't blame anyone if one gets lost in this world ... In this world where ppl are running for success and their one wrong move and succes is snatched .. they have to be on tip toes but they just forget a little thing that in earning success money u forget neglect the one u do this for ..

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