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Chokri_ASR IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 29 May 2015 at 8:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Arshi67

Originally posted by Chokri_ASR

Originally posted by Chokri_ASR

And I shall post it on the next page...


How short is short?   LOL

Does one minute sound okay? LOL

You know for the teaser...Embarrassed

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Chokri_ASR IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 29 May 2015 at 8:12am | IP Logged
Teaser - Chapter 12

"What the hell is wrong with you?! You scared me..."  She paused, taking a deep breath, trying to calm her rapidly beating heart.

He looked at her puzzled, then shrugged, sprawling on the middle of the queen size bed. He yawned, putting his hands underneath his head, feeling tired. It seemed jet lag was catching up with him.

"And... um... what... er... why are you laying on the bed like that? If you sleep like that... where am I... going to sleep..."  She stuttered incoherently, looking away, as her cheeks warmed.

And then it hit him, as he followed her gaze to the bed.

Was his wife nervous sleeping with him? But why?

He furrowed his eyebrow, tugging his lip in a mischievous smile, realizing why.  

Time to have some fun.

"Come on, Khushi... you know I like to sleep this way. Actually this bed is quite cozy... Why don't you join me? I bet we are going to be very comfortable for the next few nights here..."


I hope this lighter teaser makes up for the last chapter.  Now let's see the crazy, fun, totally off or spot on speculations. It makes this writer so happy!

Hoping to see you all Tuesday with Chapter 12!

Before I open it up for speculations, I wanted to say a few words about the last chapter.

Thank you. Thank you. Thank you. For all those that read the difficult update, despite my warning. And for those that left such wonderful, touching comments. I truly did not except it whether you read it silently or commented. 

And a heartfelt appreciation to all of those that shared their story. It takes guts and courage to be able to do that. I was overwhelmed with each one of your comments, not as a writer but as a woman. Every comment, story, left me in tears.    

Just like any of my chapters, as a writer I go back and read it a day after I post in its entirety. It's for me to grade myself, since I can't edit it any further. And I was overwhelmed once again at how agonizing  it was to read it, so I give you all a round of applause for indulging me by reading my work.

A few of you have asked about the plot and whether this is going to end happily. What I can say is I have the story plotted all the way to the epilogue, and yes it will have a happy ending, a very happy ending.  That is a promise, and you all know I don't break my promises.  Though it will take time to get there, so I ask for patience.

Again, no words I can say will truly express my gratitude and what you all mean to me.  But, Thank you all so very much and I love you dammit!

Love hamesha,


PS. Sorry for the rambling.

Edited by Chokri_ASR - 29 May 2015 at 8:37am

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bhavis IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 29 May 2015 at 8:15am | IP Logged
Hu avi gayi to read teaser. So finally they are with their familyBig smile

Edited by -Bhavi - 29 May 2015 at 8:17am

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Sugar_Hugs Goldie

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Posted: 29 May 2015 at 8:23am | IP Logged
Awesome and touching update...
Very well written
continue soon...
Thanks for the pm..

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canapoem IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 29 May 2015 at 8:25am | IP Logged
Jigs, read your note and thank you for writing such a wonderful story. 

As a reader, I feel so happy and privileged to be a part of the journey of this wonderful story and love you too. Hug

Coming to the teaser, so have they reached California? It feels so relaxing and nice to see this flirty Arnav. Wink

Edited by canapoem - 29 May 2015 at 8:29am

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saschades IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 29 May 2015 at 8:27am | IP Logged
beautiful teaser Jigs I am hoping this teaser is for the break Arnav had decided to go away with Khushi!!!
gotto love happy endings
thank you beautiful xx

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PSharada IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 29 May 2015 at 8:30am | IP Logged
First of all - thanks a lot for the happy teaser. Looks like Arnav and Khushi have come to California to Khushi's parents house. Looking forward to the update. 

And I am sorry that I couldn't bring myself to comment on the last chapter. I had a close friend who had a still born baby and the update just reminded me of her - it was heart wrenching to see her crying madly after she was told that her baby was still born. I was so shaken up at that sight. It is such a pain for the parents to lose a child - whether at 16 weeks or at 39 weeks. It takes a lot of will power to come over that crisis. Your update just reminded me of her and I just couldn't bring myself to pen anything on the chapter. 

And thanks a lot for saying that the story is going to have a happy ending. Now that the sad part is all out and over, I am looking forward to the emotional bonding of Arnav and Khushi and they growing strong together. Will be waiting for Tuesday and the update.

Edited by psarada - 29 May 2015 at 8:30am

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sman IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 29 May 2015 at 8:40am | IP Logged
omg omg I cant beleive am the first one to comment on such a tesing teaser ;-)  not fair on a TGIF Jigs..bahut naughty ho gayi ho..
Looks like they r in Anjali's place as Arnav feels its a cozy room.. if it was Payal / Kushi's parents place, it would be too formal... 

by the time I posted the message, I am pushed to next page :-))))  this shows the popularity of this wonderful FF

Edited by sman - 29 May 2015 at 8:40am

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