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ipkndlover75 Senior Member

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Posted: 26 May 2015 at 11:13am | IP Logged
This chapter was a emotional roller coaster for me for many reasons... But appreciate u writing on such a sensitive, emotional topic and that too with so much sensitivityand so beautifully...
So happy that Arshi came together to grieve their daughter finally... And am hoping this infuses them with positivity for their relationship too...hats off to u!!!!

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russelskhushi IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 26 May 2015 at 11:17am | IP Logged
there is no words in me in which i can express my feelings after reading this chapter... i just pray that no parents go through this pain... you brought out every emotion excellently ... thank you ... loved it..

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nik1310 Goldie

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Posted: 26 May 2015 at 11:20am | IP Logged

Gosh...what an update. Well, according to me you have combined all the emotions between Arshi so well that I was feeling their deep love foremost even during their lowest moment of losing 'pari'. Miscarriage is such a heart goes out to all mothers who unfortunately had to go through this sad phase in their lives. But am certain it is not a shame...families need to be brave and courageous to emerge out of such a tragedy without being scarred. Love & support between couples will ensure the smooth passage... Just like how Arshi are now getting themselves back on track by finally 'dealing' with their grief. Well recorded Jigs very emotional indeed. 

Finally loved Pari being with her grandma looking over her 'nutty' parents from her perch among the stars. 

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Lovelyday Goldie

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Posted: 26 May 2015 at 11:25am | IP Logged
Wow... I m still trying to swallow the lump in my throat.. That was an exceptionally well written emotional update.. I have tears in my eyes as I write this. Losing a baby is devastating . Healing happens at some point but void remains... You have written the sensitive topic in such a real way that I forgot that I m reading a fiction. Having been thru and seen others having a lot of ups and downs and situations like these , it broke my heart to see them in such deep pain. Pain that takes one's soul to heal..and healing happens with the loved one that goes thru the same pain with the same intensity... Fantastic way to see pari up in the stars with her granny .. That does bring some closure to me.. I can already see the first step to their happiness forever being taken:)... Again, I can't get over how beautifully u have penned this update.. Take a bow girl! U rock..

Edited by Serene77 - 26 May 2015 at 11:27am

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-afsha- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 26 May 2015 at 11:25am | IP Logged
Beautifully written
Loved the update 

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nizahairu Goldie

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Posted: 26 May 2015 at 11:29am | IP Logged
I understand this situation
I had a miscarriage in the six month of pregnancy
When i read this update i am crying...
U r a wonderful writer...can i hug u...
Nice update

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inamajar Senior Member

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Posted: 26 May 2015 at 11:30am | IP Logged

Cry  Hug

A very emotional heart wrenching update. I am not able to put down words. 

Beautifully written bringing out the emotions and turmoil a couple go through in the given situation. 
The moment a couple plan for a child their bond Starts. They need not - need to feel, just the thought
of a Child on it's own creates an emotional Bondage and there starts the Journey for the Parents. 

A loss is a Loss, though one tries to come out of it, the Pain always will linger - for a life time. 

A prayer to all the Departed souls for their short period on this planet and to the parents, Hugs for the parents for the  strength they gather with the pain which is always there to move on in life. 

Edited by inamajar - 29 May 2015 at 12:29pm

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yoga123 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 26 May 2015 at 11:35am | IP Logged

This chapter has reminded me of my miscarriage...I could relate to what Arnav and Khushi went through...unfortunately for me, when I was told by the doctor about the miscarriage my husband was travelling and I couldn't tell him until he was back home...the disappointment and heart I saw in his eyes that day still haunts me...the grief will not leave us for this life time...I was anxious while reading this chapter but wanted to complete reading helped...I could understand why khushi did not want any suggestions on how to deal with a miscarriage...people will not let us grieve on our loss...everybody has to say something about it...I agree it is out of concern...but it takes time to come out of that and people around you should give that space...but here khushi should not have distanced is a loss for both of them...I was happy they have done it together now...this chapter made me very emotional...thanks for the PM

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