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ArHi FF: Revealed #3 | Link to Thread 4 Pg 1 (Page 56)

pravallika IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 26 May 2015 at 10:55am | IP Logged
UnRes :)
Heart wrenchingly emotional update jigs:(
You made me  cry with this update.
Their pain is bottled up inside them and there was no outlet all these days and both of them suffered  alone..
 Now they are suffering  it together and going through  the pain all again should  make them feel better.. which they should've done it long ago..
But the best part of this update was kushi's answer for going away from him.. that confession  was beautiful  jigs.. i was like speechless  after that.. 
I know you are giving a question  for the poll every week.. but the poll is answered  by girls on the forum and as far as i know, there are no males who are participating  in the poll.. so i asked  few friends of mine that who will suffer more in miscarriages???? i got the answers  like, mother will suffer more from my female friends, but their husbands answers were interesting..
They said that even father of the baby suffers the same or some times more because  the mother will get a chance to feel the baby for few weeks at least  but the father, will not even get a chance to feel the baby in miscarriages, even though  the contribution  for baby making and the anxiety  and anticipation  is equal for both the parents..
I just felt like sharing  this males pov with you jigs..
this is the most beautiful and emotional update of this story,which is wonderfully  penned down,  though i feel this for every update :)
I'm waiting  for the next update 
Thanx for the pm jigs


Edited by pravallika - 26 May 2015 at 11:52pm

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Posted: 26 May 2015 at 10:55am | IP Logged
I can't imagine how difficult this update must have been for you to write. It was painful but beautiful. It's good that they finally opened up, after almost two years. That was undoubtedly the hardest part of their journey and while they will never get over the loss, hopefully they can live with it better after finally opening  up about it.

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Posted: 26 May 2015 at 10:58am | IP Logged
brilliantly penned update..very emotional and hard-hitting...keep up the good work going..Thumbs Up

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Posted: 26 May 2015 at 11:01am | IP Logged
I was reading this during my lunch and couldn't stop crying, had to stop reading as I was getting weird looks so went out and finished it. I don't know how you wrote it ( this much raw emotion must be difficult to write ) but it was so gut wrenchingly heart breaking :(. You are an awesome writer. You made us feel for them like we would feel for our own. Hats off to your writing!

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Posted: 26 May 2015 at 11:04am | IP Logged
it was an emotional update
going through this phase is really hard
i know some couple who suffered this
and the chapter is wonderful
i am glad they are communicating ...

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Posted: 26 May 2015 at 11:07am | IP Logged
very beautifully written... im crying buckets... this is a very touchy subject for me... so pardon me for not writing more Smile

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Posted: 26 May 2015 at 11:09am | IP Logged
A beautifully written emotional update. It was very heart wrenching but glad they are communicating.

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Posted: 26 May 2015 at 11:10am | IP Logged
such sensitive
heart touching update
left uswith heavy. and aching heart

brilliantly
fabulously written

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