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ArHi FF: Revealed #3 | Link to Thread 4 Pg 1 (Page 53)

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Posted: 25 May 2015 at 12:03pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by LadyR

' The idea is to write it, so that people hear it, and it slides through the brain straight to the heart..'  Maya Angelou

This is what you do with each update you present to us.. I know you'll not disappoint your readers



@Red and Bold, I just wish that there are "million and million" 'Like' button to say how much this quote is in alignment with Revealed...

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Posted: 25 May 2015 at 1:53pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Heavens_Flower

Waves...



Khushi: 
"My baby..."  
I sobbed quietly... Unable to contain my happiness
It was such a blessing... I marveled at it's loveliness
I hold you lovingly... With everything turning to tenderness
It was such a joy... You took away my childlessness


Arnav:
"Il mio bambino..."
I rejoice merrily... You took away my sadness
It was such a delight...I thank this blessedness
I await impatiently... You are my guiding brightness
It was such a pleasure...I am impatient with cheerfulness


Arshi:
"We're having a baby!"
We exclaim brightly... You are our hopefulness
It is such a euphoric... We feel blessed with goodness
We adjust deftly...There is a sense of helplessness
It is such a responsibility... We accept with graciousness


Arnav:
"Il mio bambino..."
I cry brokenly... You took away my happiness
It is with tears... I say goodbye with lifelessness
I despair silently... You broke all my peacefulness
It is with sorrow... I say I am missing your presentness


Khushi: 
"My baby..."  
I sobbed quietly... Unable to contain my sadness
It is so sad... You wiped away my rightfulness
It is with difficulty... I must bid goodbye prettiness
It is heartbreaking... My future is clocked in darkness



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It's a pleasure floating in the maze of your words, being gently tossed by the ebb and flow of the tides of your verse. 

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Posted: 26 May 2015 at 4:24am | IP Logged
Update sooon. waiting desperately for it

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Posted: 26 May 2015 at 8:53am | IP Logged

Hey Jigs...How is it going?

Firstly, I'm so sorry...for the prolonged absence and lack of comments. AD has been quite hectic and I've just been sleeping in all the free time I get. Embarrassed

I have just caught up with the updates properly. They have been a couple of really emotional chapters.

Coming to the updates, if I haven't said it enough, I love the relationship Arnav-Khushi share with Aman-Lavanya and the boys. They're like family. Always there in time of need - good times and bad ones, too.

I understand Khushi's avoidance of confrontation. I guess she wants to close herself off to any more pain and hurt or finding out that her hopes were baseless. She feels she has already lost Arnav emotionally and the physical and legal separation is just going to seal the deal. And, that is what she fears most I believe.

I hope she goes with her heart and gives their marriage and Arnav another chance.

Initially I had thought that the baby issue is one of, if not the major cause of the rift between them. Personally, I don't think a child is what makes, sustains or breaks a marriage. Here too, I guess that is not THE issue. The main issue is failure to communicate properly, I think. Emotional distance and lack of communication have amplified all the problems in their life.

Your description of their pain and grief is heart-wrenching. Cry I know that they know in their heart that the only way to get through this is together.  I just hope they act on that and begin with facing their demons, as Khushi puts it.

 

Wonderful writing as always, Jigs! Clap Looking forward to the next update. Hope to be around more henceforth.

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Posted: 26 May 2015 at 9:16am | IP Logged
Sorry for this very late comment, Jigs, AD has been extraordinarily hectic these past couple weeks.

The last two chapters were beautifully written and very evocative of the emotional turmoil these two are going through. Very heart wrenching esp because these two love each other so much and each has a void in his/her life that only the other can fill.

The description of that room and their reminiscences were so heart rending. My heart went out to both of them. These two need to build bridges, reestablish trust and communicate. Sharing always eases your soul's burden...esp when the person you're sharing your pain with is suffering just as much as you are.


Awesome update, Jigs Hug

Looking forward to the next...and of course, I love, love, love, this blue eyed Arnav :D


Loads of love,

Jen



Edited by IPK007 - 26 May 2015 at 9:16am

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Posted: 26 May 2015 at 9:51am | IP Logged
It's Tuesday!!!! 

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Posted: 26 May 2015 at 10:04am | IP Logged
Waiting for a Reveal today. 
Smile

Writerji?

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Posted: 26 May 2015 at 10:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Mirabell

Waiting for a Reveal today. 
Smile

Writerji?

Coming up on the next page...Wink


Edited by Chokri_ASR - 27 May 2015 at 5:50pm

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