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fangurrl IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 23 May 2015 at 1:48pm | IP Logged
I don't know what to say
can't imagine how a woman deals with the loss of her baby :(
she hud away her pain for so long hurting inside and Arnav too
and that caused the distance between them , now it's leading to separation
I almost cried when both of them touched the door of their baby's room and the pain they felt
they have a long way to bride the gap between them and make things alright
I hope khushi opens up a little bit!

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BarunFan1212 Senior Member

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Posted: 23 May 2015 at 3:23pm | IP Logged
Hi Jigs,
Sorry again for the late comments.
Another emotional painful but excellent update. You writing make us feel their pain and joy.
It's looks like they have not shared their pain to each other. They bottled up their own pain in their hearts. Where as if they have been the pillar of support for each other in those agonizing moments they wouldn't have drifted away so easily.
She has shut him out and he has let her shut him out both though they are doing their best but it had the opposite reactions.
It was so beautiful to see their happy moments. How he missed her after his trip to LA. How happy and thrilled she was to share the good news and how elated he has been hearing he is going to be a papa."
Why couldn't they shared their sorrow the same way?What happened in between? How did she miscarried the baby?
I almost cried for both of them.
Happy to know that Arnav has disclosed his future plans and that he is done with WAKEFIELD.
Thanks for the PM but I read it before it Wink sneaked in between my busy schedule at office to check if you've updated and when I saw your update I couldn't hold it till I'm off work.
Anxiously waiting to see what actions both are going to take regarding this? are they going to let it sleep or talk and get it out in the open.

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pravallika IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 23 May 2015 at 7:08pm | IP Logged
This time no teaser jigs?????

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bellacoolio Senior Member

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Posted: 23 May 2015 at 7:20pm | IP Logged
A very painful chapter indeed! It's never easy to read through the pain! But very well written.
I think everyone reacts to pain differently. Some are open about it, some react inwardly, some are brave enough to overcome it and some just crumble under it. I am not sure if Arnav and Khushi have ever discussed their emotional suffering after the loss of their baby with each other, they just seem to have braved it all alone and drifted away from their most strongest support - each other! Having said that, there in no right or wrong way to react to your suffering. Whatever your reaction is, it is just the right one at that time!

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shalini_s IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 24 May 2015 at 2:12am | IP Logged
good one.. so intense and emotional..

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srilathas Goldie

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Posted: 24 May 2015 at 2:14am | IP Logged
beautfiully written dear...
awesome update...and it is so touching to c both of them r suffering equally...

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sk2405 Goldie

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Posted: 24 May 2015 at 7:59am | IP Logged
I believe they both have been going through the same pain, it's just that the way they have come to deal with is very different. It's apparent that had they spoken their hearts out and shared their grief earlier, they would have been in a much better mental state today. But now after having realized the biggest blunder that resulted into the fall of their marriage, I hope they take a clue and talk about all their differences openly. That, in a true sense, would mark the beginning of their efforts towards saving their marriage.

Losing their child is the most unfortunate thing that could happen to a couple, especially when the baby's mere 4 month presence has already had them weaving their lives around the tiny tot. Their grief and sadness comes from deep within them and it will take a lot of time for them to set things right.
I believe, Lavanya and Aman's presence has always played a significant role in their lives. Infact it was only after Arnav-khushi visited the Mathurs and spent time with the kids that they realised what could have gone wrong in their past.

Waiting for the next part.
Update soon. Smile

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Heavens_Flower IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 25 May 2015 at 11:53am | IP Logged

"My baby..."  
I sobbed quietly... Unable to contain my happiness
It was such a blessing... I marveled at it's loveliness
I hold you lovingly... With everything turning to tenderness
It was such a joy... You took away my childlessness

"Il mio bambino..."
I rejoice merrily... You took away my sadness
It was such a delight...I thank this blessedness
I await impatiently... You are my guiding brightness
It was such a pleasure...I am impatient with cheerfulness

"We're having a baby!"
We exclaim brightly... You are our hopefulness
It is such a euphoric... We feel blessed with goodness
We adjust deftly...There is a sense of helplessness
It is such a responsibility... We accept with graciousness

"Il mio bambino..."
I cry brokenly... You took away my happiness
It is with tears... I say goodbye with lifelessness
I despair silently... You broke all my peacefulness
It is with sorrow... I say I am missing your presentness

"My baby..."  
I sobbed quietly... Unable to contain my sadness
It is so sad... You wiped away my rightfulness
It is with difficulty... I must bid goodbye prettiness
It is heartbreaking... My future is clocked in darkness

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