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inlovewithtvk Senior Member

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Posted: 20 May 2015 at 4:10am | IP Logged
beautiful.. full of emotions update..i loved the scene where khushi told tht they r going to be parents.. nd loved the scene u wrote when khushi nd arnav both stood near the close door of their baby's room.. it was heart wrenching.. waiting for next update nd curious to knw wht will be their next step to mend their relationship..take care..

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Chokri_ASR Goldie

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Posted: 20 May 2015 at 5:23am | IP Logged
i was so eager for their confrontation in this update.
but you have planned something else & reserved that for nxt part..
but really love the pentup frustration, emotion, sadness, hope you have build to start their convo will bring more effects..
the memory of their child, the way Khushi share that new with Arnav, the way he react, the way they share that moment of 'Mommy & Papa' & off course their happy tears brings that tear of joy in my eyes also. this was so beautifully written..
& the moment where they were staring each other from window & the moment where they shared of outside baby's room but Alone was very emotional & heart wrenching..
but at the end in bedroom the way Arnav was behaving to keep Khushi awake & clear some misunderstanding atleast was in a way very funny, adorable & sweet & happy that he cleared the big source of misunderstanding of about Wakefield, Voretax & being shifting in NY, which in a way the creater of main problem in their happy life...

& i would agree with no teaser this week, considering the Big emotional update in a line..
but cant help to wait for that..

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mansin129 Senior Member

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Posted: 20 May 2015 at 6:31am | IP Logged
A very moving update...finally kushi is also ready to work on her marriage... Good turning point in the story. 
Onlooker Goldie

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Posted: 20 May 2015 at 6:57am | IP Logged
A tough update to read..and you penned it beautifully..ClapClap
nishu_shorna IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 20 May 2015 at 7:36am | IP Logged
Beautifully written update jigna di... The past scene was beautiful... where's this beautiful bonding and understanding they had is lost...sigh... feel bad for them... Arnav needs oceans of patience to deal with his wife... Nd seems like he now understands this and I'm so so sooo glad for that... waiting to see ahead... 
arshi_sarun IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 20 May 2015 at 8:19am | IP Logged
Poor arshi both r suffering thanks for the pm

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MDTharun IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 20 May 2015 at 9:05am | IP Logged
Arnav - khushi have reached the point where they have to definitely discuss the issue without turning away . I think prolonged delay in having baby as added up the complications in khushi's pregnancy . Its not only khushi but Arnav too who has lost their baby . Both have avoided talking about their loss and chose to forget as if nothing happened . Arnav has busied  himself in work to distract himself likewise khushi . No wonder lack of communication , not being for each other has distanced the couple .
Love Arnav's attitude of not giving up on their marriage , its khushi who is backing down Ouch

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pup03 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 20 May 2015 at 10:49am | IP Logged
felt nice to hear Khushi finally decided to talk over their tragedy for the sake of her husband and their marriage.. felt sad for ARSHI but still they can try and be happy with each other instead of giving up.. loved the update.. 

thanks for pm Smile

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