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ArHi FF: Revealed #3 | Link to Thread 4 Pg 1 (Page 42)

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Posted: 19 May 2015 at 11:23am | IP Logged
Khushi seems to be emotionally broken and shattered to an extent where it seems there is no turning back .. It seems like she doesn't want to turn back ... And this came thru right from the beginning .. Even before the loss of the baby was ever mentioned . What did Arnav do to that extent that she's so closed? So shattered? So guarded? Must be something really big and irrevocably huge mistake that has driven her away to this extent... When one looses a baby, I can't understand why a couple waits for two years to grieve together... I do get that everyone feels and reacts in their own way especially grief.. But being so in love , I felt it's odd for her not to be taking his emotional support and care during such a devastating time... Was their relation broken by then? I hope they do sit down and sort out .. Obviously just communication cannot be the issue and reason for their (her) reason to separate ways...
I can't believe I m so impacted by their state which shows how great u write :)... Lovely update as usual..

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Posted: 19 May 2015 at 11:24am | IP Logged
Speechless ...the way u written arnav and kushis point of view..we cannot take sides...
Hoping their talk helpsto heel their pain and bring some happiness...

Thanks for the update jigs...

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Posted: 19 May 2015 at 11:24am | IP Logged
Awesome n very painful update..

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Posted: 19 May 2015 at 11:25am | IP Logged


So depressed, Jigs, so heart broken...Asli duniya kya kaam dard naak hain ki tum is story ko bhee itna pecheeda bana diya...I do not have a clue how I am going to continue reading this to be honest...watch Khushi and Arnav head towards the precipice of their marital life is not something for the weak hearted...wonder why...but simply cannot bear the thought...I thought we had a pact, right...Arnav and Khushi hamesha...

So, the chapter has been woven together with your immaculate narrative technique...it is truly sad to see the various challenges this couple had to go through...poor Arnav...while Khushi opted to distance herself from him and them, Arnav it appears suffered the most...not even important now as to how she lost the baby...unless it was something he was responsible for either directly or indirectly...what will happen next? I am even scared to ask...after losing his mom and their baby, I hope he won't have to lose them...I am too overwrought to write anymore...and I never thought this day would come...always been full of words...this has knocked things right out of the ballpark...while I do not cry reading any pieces of writing - fact or fiction - I promise you today I am close to doing so...

Will keep the faith in you and let you do your thing...


Best,

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Posted: 19 May 2015 at 11:32am | IP Logged
Aww a very heart touching update !!
Very Sad to know they lost their baby ...n instead of being there for each other during this lost dream ,  they chose to drift away n pretend to bury their grief alone..But that pain n anguish is still raw as it was 2 years back...n only will lessen when they wl share it together ...hope khushi takes that initiative this time..Indeed it would be an emotional ride but a much awaited one .
P.S Loved the beautiful way in which khushi disclosed her pregnancy to Arnav...It was a very serene moment! !
Thanks for pm

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Posted: 19 May 2015 at 11:37am | IP Logged
Loosing a child after all the anticipation is very hard on any couple. You have brought out the pain in your words beautifully. Beautiful update

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Mirabell Senior Member
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Posted: 19 May 2015 at 11:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by LadyR

' The idea is to write it, so that people hear it, and it slides through the brain straight to the heart..'  Maya Angelou

This is what you do with each update you present to us.. I know you'll not disappoint your readers


I couldn't agree more. But what a lovely quote you brought to us. Thank you. 

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Posted: 19 May 2015 at 11:42am | IP Logged
Hey Jigs...that's been a emotional roller coaster... But glad to know the root cause that drove a wedge between the two...
They have not grieved together... In fact Khushi has still not recovered...but I am so glad Arnav has recognized the signs this time around... And really wants to work hard at saving his marriage ..that is appreciable...
In fact loved the reassuring statement that he told Khushi before sleeping... I just hope with all hopes that Khushi responds...I know she's been hurting a lot and Arnav expounded it with being buried in his work and ignoring her...

Wonderfully written...

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