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anukap Senior Member

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Posted: 19 May 2015 at 9:40am | IP Logged

oh my god! the pain, the grief, the frustration were all so palpable in this chapter.  i had a lump in my throat throughout. you put it all so well. my heart goes out to both khushi and arnav. they really need to talk these two. khushi is still in deep depression and arnav just let everything slide for more than two years. thank god he has woken up and is trying to do something now. However i really do feel for khushi and her loss of the baby which will remain in her heart for ever, but she hasn't lost arnav, she needs to open up and share her feelings with him and not be afraid to acknowledge that he still loves her and wants to save their marriage. can't wait to read what happened will khushi process the information that arnav is no longer working on Wakfield and not moving to NY/ 
love and hugs for taking us on this roller coaster :)

Edited by anukap - 20 May 2015 at 12:03am

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ranogill IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 19 May 2015 at 9:42am | IP Logged
 i am happy that arnav is not letting go and really happy that at last khushi also decided to talk for him and their marriage sake...awesome story

Edited by ranogill - 19 May 2015 at 10:05am

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deepsdspeed Goldie

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Posted: 19 May 2015 at 9:49am | IP Logged
lovely and an emotional update..
but im glad in many ways..

i see HOPE..happy to see that aranv is not trying to withdraw and just watch it being over..
glad that he want to talk about issues which they buried in within themselves..

i see DETERMINATION..glad that this time he is seeing and trying hard to see what is being hidden by khushi..hiding emotions and feelings, is a way to develop and increase spaces between a couple..

glad that he is ready to cross them and finally im soo happy that khushi decided too..

thank you for this lovely update and im al set for the emotional ride..

Edited by deepsdspeed - 19 May 2015 at 11:59pm

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candyjan IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 19 May 2015 at 9:52am | IP Logged
Tsply brilliant...
Very welldone yar...

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inamajar Senior Member

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Posted: 19 May 2015 at 9:53am | IP Logged
A truly heartbreaking update. You have brought out the emotions attached to it beautifully, bringing tears to the readers. Cry

Hope they open up to release and reduce their heartache to help them heal the extent it is possible in these situations. Always tragic when you don't open up or don't cry to let that pain pass by. Hopefully they can bring closure to something they have avoided due to the pain and impact of it on them. 

Too emotional an update, won't write anything more than saying it was a heartfelt update. 


Edited by inamajar - 19 May 2015 at 9:55am

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hararnav IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 19 May 2015 at 10:02am | IP Logged
what an emotional update...
no one can do anything to take away the pain of loss , only time can lessen it but not make it go away completely.

how is khushi different from arnav in dealing with loss?? didn't she also shut him out after few weeks of her miscarriage? is there some reason for that?
their problems run deeper than what is appearing. 
is the loss of arnavs mom n child the sole reason for the cracks to start in their marriage? hope not.
i feel there are many more things adding up to their loss and their lack of sharing troubles with each other might have added to the lot...
hope the talking  about the loss of their baby and share the grief might take them a step closer to save their marriage 

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MysticRiver IF-Addictz

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Posted: 19 May 2015 at 10:02am | IP Logged
very well written heart went out to both Arnav and Khushi.. please do continue soon...waiting for the next update eagerly...Thumbs Up

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Maghinalls Goldie

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Posted: 19 May 2015 at 10:06am | IP Logged
Feeling bad for both of them 

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