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Posted: 17 May 2015 at 4:19pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Heavens_Flower

Open up...



Open up...your heart 
        Let me see the love that is always there
Open up...your mind
        Let it reveal that I am there everywhere


Open up...your soul
        Let it merge with my soul forever
Open up...your thought
        Let your thoughts be about your lover 


Open up...and let me make it up
        Let me make up for all my absent
Open up...and let us regroup
        Lets gang up with new commitment


Open up...for me to console
        Let there be a chance for a happy future
Open up...for me to follow
        Let me follow your dreams and be better


Open up...and let me hold you
        Let me hold you with ardent
Open up..and let me love you
        Let me love you as it was meant



Ahhh how do you come up such wonderful poems unique with every chapter?  This one... I LOVE IT!!!  Heart  How apt this for the next couple of chapters!

Thank you so much DI! Hug


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Posted: 17 May 2015 at 4:25pm | IP Logged
I am truly sorry for having been MIA this past week, but have been traveling for work and AD has been brutal keeping me away from here.


Just went through all the comments... thank you everyone for indulging me with your words. I know I haven't had a chance to thank you all individually due to my hectic schedule the past few weeks, but please know your comments and kind words keep me motivated to continue to write and update every week.

So... thank you from the bottom of my heart! 


And now I shall go work on Chapter 10...Cry... wish me luck...Confused

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Posted: 17 May 2015 at 6:24pm | IP Logged
Of how sad !! Khushi and arnav had lost a baby !! Looking forward to the next update. 

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Posted: 17 May 2015 at 7:10pm | IP Logged


Oh my... thats an emotional teaser...
Khushi did lose her baby and the door might be the door to the nursery...
Can't wait for the update...

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Posted: 17 May 2015 at 10:47pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Chokri_ASR

I am truly sorry for having been MIA this past week, but have been traveling for work and AD has been brutal keeping me away from here.


Just went through all the comments... thank you everyone for indulging me with your words. I know I haven't had a chance to thank you all individually due to my hectic schedule the past few weeks, but please know your comments and kind words keep me motivated to continue to write and update every week.

So... thank you from the bottom of my heart! 


And now I shall go work on Chapter 10...Cry... wish me luck...Confused



Please don't say sorry... You will put us to shame... Because we understand that AD is hectic, we shall support you in every way we can...



I know Chapter 10 is going to be an emotional roller coaster for you to write... You are wished  all the very best and we are all here to support... Hug

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Posted: 18 May 2015 at 7:02am | IP Logged
Just when I was ready to update my comments on the last chapter, I saw the teaser out that answered some of my inquiries and seemed so opposite of last chapter.
 
Firstly, a big hug vaala sorry for being away from the story for the last few days. Lets just say, just like Arnav, I am now realizing how the balance can tilt and life goes out the windowUnhappy.
 
The kids chapter was adorable in so many way. Khushi rightly deserves and can keep the chanda, suraj and taare, as long as she leaves our anmol ratan aka Jigs to usBig smile.
 
Coming to the last chapter, Khushi's introspection in the courtroom was already a big change for me. Drama's of the court room kind or family room kind always make an interesting comparison. But, a few days ago it was all about the "when" and now atleast it is about the eternal conflict "why". It is good to see her caressing the ring on her finger, but we all would like to know what is the big fear that is still caressing her mind. You were the usual miserly brilliant self, giving us a peek just enough to see and not to seeSmile.  
 
I am glad though that there are no hints of any fear on Arnav side. He definitely earned the brownie points elevating himself from the decorative husband to the caretaker kindSmile. Packing, playing with the kids, putting them to sleep - the unfolding of last week definitely seems to have given him a spring in his step and a day at the Mathur's was exactly what the doctor ordered for Arshi.  
 
Talking about the Mathur's, it is getting very hard to underrate their importance for Arshi. Even the kids got involved and made it complete in every sense. Seeing and hearing can get the things done but nothing can better actually doing it. Them being Ma..si and Chachu, even for a day, should have rekindled whatever it was "two years since".
 
The kid's questions, the kiss and baby talk - It was such an adorable in so many ways. Now that they have got the taste, I am really hoping that they start going on the huntBig smile (pun intended).  Can't wait for tomorrow.

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Posted: 18 May 2015 at 4:02pm | IP Logged
Very touching chapter. ...thanks for the PM

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Posted: 18 May 2015 at 5:48pm | IP Logged
Arnav's motto:


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