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ArHi FF: Revealed #3 | Link to Thread 4 Pg 1 (Page 119)

.LadyHitler. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 16 June 2015 at 11:03am | IP Logged
Wow! Your fic transports me to some other world! ArShi ki duniya.. Awesome update! Beautifully written!

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Heavens_Flower IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 16 June 2015 at 11:12am | IP Logged

It was not only a dream
But a soul's silent scream
A Father's distress in extreme
A heart becoming unseam

It is a promise... a pakka promise
A promise that is concise 
A Mother's love getting revitalize
In her bleeding heart hope raise

It is a little scheming
But a harmless dealing
A Sister's love leading
A heart to being its healing

It is a mighty assurance
"I will be right with you", sureness
A Nephew's simple guidance
And an innocent baby's acceptance

And they listen to each other
Always be there for one another
A Father and Mother together
Face one day at a time forever

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russelskhushi IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 16 June 2015 at 11:24am | IP Logged
it was amazing ... one could feel their pain ... the way you brought out their emotions was really touching ... but finally they brought it out ...
loved it..

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Uzii Goldie

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Posts: 2014

Posted: 16 June 2015 at 11:30am | IP Logged
Oh it was so painful that i felt it when i was reading this chapter like a movie in front ofmy eyes so so nice n emotional.

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ragvir92 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 16 June 2015 at 11:30am | IP Logged
Wow That was a lovely update Di
Absolutely mesmerizing with the ocean part
You had written it so descriptively which feels so real
Really liked the surfing part and their short and sweet time together
And Khushi's feelings in the FB was so touching
Anju, Sid both are really  supportive
Sid is such a cute, wonderful kiddo
And Liked how ArHi is having a talk
Hopefully they resolve their issues soon and get their cute,loving kid

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just4this Goldie

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Posted: 16 June 2015 at 11:44am | IP Logged
Thank u for the update it was as usual beautiful.
Moral of the update communication is key for healthy relationship
Loved every word of it especially where both ocean become one arnav and Pacific.
Thanks dear
Ps thanks for the translation.

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LadyR Goldie

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Posts: 2390

Posted: 16 June 2015 at 11:52am | IP Logged
This was a beautiful chapter, I will confess I cried, your words so beautify portrayed their emotions.. tears are evoked for joy or pain.. whom amongst has not experienced any of this ever.

strength amidst weakness - Arnav riding the surf.. they both are each others weakness but derive strength from each other too.

healing amidst despair - when Arnav wanted to understand how Khushi coped with Bella.

happiness amidst sadness - when he addressed her as Mrs Raizada-  it brings on butterflies!

hope amidst pain-  the understanding that it's not his or her pain-  it's ours..

I loved the line where Khushi is only looking for her ocean, her Arnav.. very apt..

The ocean waves are a testament to life, one day they are crashing against each other, yes they recede but come back to lash out again..The next day may bring clam soothing waves.. akin to our lives with our partners..  we argue and fight with those we love and also create the best memories with them too...
Their journey has more healing, pain and tears but they will weather it together-  hamesha

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shubhanjli Goldie

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Posted: 16 June 2015 at 12:03pm | IP Logged
Awesome update. Touched my heart.  One of the most difficult times in Arnav and Khushi's life. Its really tough for them to forget their daughter when bella is there. And must be very hard for khushi to control during Anjali's delivery. But they both are fighters and definitely will fight this pain. May be this pain ll bring them together again.
Loved Arnav surfingWinkWink sexy sexy..
Amazing update..
Loved it. 
Thanks for pm.

Edited by shubhanjli - 22 June 2015 at 3:20am

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