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Maghinalls

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Goldie

Posted: 8 years ago

They knew the pain of loosing baby

Wonderful update

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45678

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Goldie

Posted: 8 years ago

LOVED IT. SUPERBLY AMAZIN. SO FINALLY THEY ARE GIVING IT A CHANCE,

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Greyasr

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Posted: 8 years ago

Simply splendid the way they keep their emotions hidden from each other held my breath reading the whole update

Lovely

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-SOBTIAN-

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IF-Sizzlerz

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

Wow! Your fic transports me to some other world! ArShi ki duniya.. Awesome update! Beautifully written!

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Heavens_Flower

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IF-Rockerz

Posted: 8 years ago

Healing...

It was not only a dream

But a soul's silent scream

A Father's distress in extreme

A heart becoming unseam

It is a promise... a pakka promise

A promise that is concise

A Mother's love getting revitalize

In her bleeding heart hope raise

It is a little scheming

But a harmless dealing

A Sister's love leading

A heart to being its healing

It is a mighty assurance

"I will be right with you", sureness

A Nephew's simple guidance

And an innocent baby's acceptance

And they listen to each other

Always be there for one another

A Father and Mother together

Face one day at a time forever

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772941

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Posted: 8 years ago

it was amazing ... one could feel their pain ... the way you brought out their emotions was really touching ... but finally they brought it out ...
loved it..

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Uzii

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IF-Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

Oh it was so painful that i felt it when i was reading this chapter like a movie in front ofmy eyes so so nice n emotional.

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ragvir92

@ragvir92

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

Wow That was a lovely update Di

Absolutely mesmerizing with the ocean part

You had written it so descriptively which feels so real

Really liked the surfing part and their short and sweet time together

And Khushi's feelings in the FB was so touching

Anju, Sid both are really supportive

Sid is such a cute, wonderful kiddo

And Liked how ArHi is having a talk

Hopefully they resolve their issues soon and get their cute,loving kid

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just4this

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Goldie

Posted: 8 years ago

Thank u for the update it was as usual beautiful.

Moral of the update communication is key for healthy relationship

Loved every word of it especially where both ocean become one arnav and Pacific.

Thanks dear

Ps thanks for the translation.

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Seeta

@LadyR

Goldie

Posted: 8 years ago

This was a beautiful chapter, I will confess I cried, your words so beautify portrayed their emotions.. tears are evoked for joy or pain.. whom amongst has not experienced any of this ever.

strength amidst weakness - Arnav riding the surf.. they both are each others weakness but derive strength from each other too.

healing amidst despair - when Arnav wanted to understand how Khushi coped with Bella.

happiness amidst sadness - when he addressed her as Mrs Raizada- it brings on butterflies!

hope amidst pain- the understanding that it's not his or her pain- it's ours..

I loved the line where Khushi is only looking for her ocean, her Arnav.. very apt..

The ocean waves are a testament to life, one day they are crashing against each other, yes they recede but come back to lash out again..The next day may bring clam soothing waves.. akin to our lives with our partners.. we argue and fight with those we love and also create the best memories with them too...

Their journey has more healing, pain and tears but they will weather it together- hamesha

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