ArHi FF: Revealed #3 | Link to Thread 4 Pg 1 - Page 45

Brilliantly written!

Very sad..😭

painful yet amazing

 beautifully it has been written.loved it

What an amazing update! The start of communication between the two finally! Loved the whirlpool of emotions from the start till the end 👏 I was feeling a lump in my throat! How well you've described their emotions! The doctor closing the ultrasound screen, arnav khushi finally in Pari's room after Eighteen months 😭 they are finally grieving for their loss together! Hope everything goes uphill for them from now! Just loved loved your update!   👏

Wow that was such an emotional and heart breaking update!!! Hats off to you for writing, it must not have been easy!!!!

heart wrenching
feeling sad for Arnav and khushi

Super touching part
U made me cry
Beautifully written

I already told you that this story is close to reality (at least in these parts of the world).  The subject in the latest chapter is becoming a common phenomenon.  I heard an obstetrician saying  that one in every 3 pregnancies is ending up in a miscarriage.  Girls are the most affected because they carry the baby in their womb and they are emotionally attached.  If anything happens, they feel responsible and they feel guilty.  I am not saying men do not care.  They feel more responsible towards the partner and tend to hide their pain for the loss.
What more can I say?  Hats off for choosing a serious subject and still made it worth reading.
Cheers...
Edited by Savera84 - 8 years ago

Trust me vn i say i ws crying throughout d updt!! believe me m still crying!! Nd its surely not often i cry while reading (a hard nut to crack u see)