Unchain Me IshRa FF

Hi there all you lovely YHMians; myself Umeirah here! Well you may be thinking what's all this "Unchain Me" about so let me in you on something! Actually, many years ago, this idea of a father neglecting his daughter bugged my mind. Then came an array of other story ideas linking to this one. Therefore, I thought to myself; why not explore this territory. Below I'm attaching the first part of my FF; though it may seem similar, note similar, to YHM the basic crux of my story is completely different!

Part 1

Aur bighari yeh isse... aur sir pe charay yeh! Maths mein 10 out of 100 mile hain isse!

Oh Puttar tu bhi naa! Choti si toh bachi hai.. aaram se baat kar.. ache number aajayenge!

Kya khak ache number ayenge! Subah se leke shaam tak kiska khel khood hi khatam nahi hota! Maa apne isse kuch zyaada hi sar pe chara rakha hai!

Puttar ji naa bhool ke bachpan mein tu bhi aisa hi tha! Zyaada hoshyaar naa ban! Bara CEO bana phir tha hai.. to khud isse kyun nahi padhta, hain?

Office koun dekhe gaa phir... aur sau responsibilities hain mujhe!

Raman teri beti teri sabse badi zimmedari hai!

Maa main wapas office jaa rahan hoon... zaroori meeting hai... raat ko der se lautoon ga!

Papa mere liye please chocolate ice cream laanaa...!!

Ice cream khaogi toh daant hi kharab honge!

Puttar le aana naa ice cream... Ruhi de naal milke main bhi khaaloongi!

Maa aap bhi bachi ke saath bachi maath banjao... chalo main chalta hoon

Bye Papa

Raman walked off without even glancing at Ruhi and she went over to her room, dejected at her Papa's behaviour.

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Madhu mujhe Ruhi ki bahut fikr hoti hai... jab dekho tab uski koi naa koi shikayat hi aati rehti hai uske school se. Aur doosri taraf Raman jo apni zimmedaari lene ko taiyaar hi nahi hai! Iss beech sabse zyaada asar padhta hai uss choti si bachi par! Main kya karoon... aaj Raman ne bataya ke Ruhi ko 100 mein se 10 marks mile Maths ke paper mein!

Santoshi don't worry! Sab dheere dheere theek ho jaayega! Raman apni responsibility samajh jaayega. Give him time...

Aur kitna time yaar??? 6 saal toh ho hi gaye hain... ab bhi nahi toh naa jaane kab! Meri bhi zindagi ka kuch pata nahi... kab kis waqt kya hojaye... kise maaloom!!

Be positive Santoshi please. Acha waise meri Ishu Ruhi ko tuition de sakti hai!

Yeh toh bahut achi baat kahi tune... maine toh socha bhi nahi. Ek kaam kar tu Ishu ko kehde ke aaj shaam woh humaare ghar aajaaye... 7 baje theek hoga naa???

Done!

Good good oye very good!

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PRECAP: Ishu goes over to Bhalla house to tutor Ruhi

Now that you've read it drop your comments and feedback; be it praise or criticism both accepted whole heartedly! Whether I continue or not depends on your level of interest! Thank you fellow YHMians

Love UmeirahEdited by umeirah02 - 8 years ago

Nice start! Will look forward to the next update!😊

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Nice start! Will look forward to the next update!😊</font>

Thank you dear! 😊

Interesting 

yup,you are back with new story. poor ruhi!!!! only 10 marks. she seriously need tuition. thank god santoh and madhu are friends here. waiting for next part and plz update it soon. and when will u update your other stories????? plz update them also

Hey Umeirah..

nice updated
continue soon

Wow Umeirah
Such a wonderful concept
poor ru 10 out of 100 ... Really she needs tuition
ishita padhaegi ... Good good
continue soon

Superb update
waiting 4 next

Interesting start, umeira. Do continue😊