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Posted: 8 years ago
Part 3:-
Manik:-Why not afterall its about my feelings n everyone should know that Manik Malhotra has already someone very special in his life.Aur ek tarah seh accha hee hai naa saare boys tumse dur rahenge n saari girls mujhse dur rahengi.
Nandini:-Boys ka toh mujhe nahi pata but agar kisi bhi larki ne tumhare aas paas bhi aane ki kosish ki naa then m not gonna spare them.
Manik:-O God!!!!Then what will happen to me,you will then bombard all ur jealous questions on me.
Nandini:-Just shut up.
(Manik pulled her closer to him n started kissing her everywhere)
Nandini:-Manik what r u doing, if anybody catches us overhere then we r dead.
Manik:-I don't care.
(Suddenly from no where Nyonika arrived at the terrece n was shocked to see Maanan over there)
Nyonika:-U down market girl what u r doing with my son.
Manik:-Tchh..Tchhh... poor Nyonika why always have I to remind u that m not ur son aur rahi baat Nandini ki toh she has all rights to stay with me because she is my girlfriend.
Nyonika:-Manik just stop it,she's  not of ur class why don't u get it.
Manik:-Thats non of ur bussiness n m not of ur type who is always behind class n money.I love her n mind u no one can stop me from loving her.Leave rightnow!!!!!!!!!!
Nyonika:-Do whatever u want.
(N she left the place)
Nandini:-Manik please calm down.
Manik:-(hugging)Nandini I hate her.
Nandini:-Main hoo naa Maanik.
(Rest of the Fab4 witnessed the scene n were very happy)
Mukti:-Cabir tu bikul sahi tha agar Mainik  ko koi sambhaal sakta hai toh who  sirf Nandini hai.
Alya:-I second that
Cabir:-Cabir is always right.
Dhruv:-Guys I think let's leave them alone here for sometimes.
Cabir:-Yaa n now lets leave isseh pehle yeh humein dekh ke embaress ho jaaen.
Alya:-Haa lets leave.
(All the fab4 went away n here still Manik was crying in Nandini's arms)
Manik:-Uhone duniya ki sabse purest relation ko bhi khatm kar diya Nandini.
Nandini:-Shhh...its ok Manik abb bhi someone is there who loves like a mom does.
Manik:-Who?
Nandini:-Why u forget always its my chachi,remember u r her sona munda.
Manik:-How can I forget her ,she is so naive.
I mean jahan is cruel world mein apne bhi saath chod dete hain wahaan she looks after u n Rishabh as if she's ur mom.
Nandini:-I know that, before I came to Mumbai Amms was taking care of me but when I came here Chachi took care of me n Rishabh so well.
Manik:-She is very nice person from heart.
 
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Edited by Sandhirrocks - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
lovely update😊
continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
nice update
loved it
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Posted: 8 years ago
Love this, the mention of chachi and him standing up 2 Nyo...so sweet, great job...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Part 4:-
Manik:-Wait I'll give a call to chachi.
Nandini:-What for?
Manik:-Aree I want to have my lunch at ur place.My favourite chole...
Nandini:-Relly.
Manik:-Yes my baccha.
Chachi:-Hello Manik beta kaise ho.
Manik:-Chachi main bikul theek hoon bass mujhe ek favour chahiye tha.
Chachi:-Manik beta ek baar bolo toh sahi.
Manik:-Chachi kya main aaj aapke ghar lunch karne aa sakta hoon.
Chachi:-Thappad marungi tumhe main abb yeh tumhara bhi ghar hai tum jab chaho tabb aa sakte ho aur khana bhi kha sakte ho.
Manik:-Thank u but Chachi please mere liye chole jarur banana.
Chachi:-Hai mera sona munda main jarur bana doongi.
Manik:-Ok Chachi mai aur Nandini aadhe ghante mein aa jaaenge.
Chachi:-Haa haa tab tak tum dono apna roamance continue rakhna.
Manik:-Chachi aap bhi naa.Ok bie
Nandini:-Manik ur blushing.
Manik:-Who me?M not bushing at all.
Nandini:-Aww look at u.
Manik:-Nandini please don't tease me like Cabir naa.
Nandini:-U r so cute.
Manik:-(kiss)
Nandini:-Manik!!!!!!!!!
Manik:-Now ur blushing.
Nandini:-Hmh...monkey malhotra.
Manik:-Come with me.
(Manik went down with Nandini were Mukti n Alya were already there.Muklya were pretending to be angry due to which Nandini was scared so she hide herself behind Manik's back)
Nandini:-Manik please save me from them .
Manik:-Nandini come out they will not do anything to u.
Mukti:-What do think of urself Nandini Moorty?
Alya:-Why u hurted Manik?
Nandini:-Alya Mukti wo...
Mukti:-Wo wo kya haan.
Manik:-Enough guys please stop scaring her.
Alya:-We r dam serious Manik.
(Due to this Nandini started sobbing in Manik's arm.Manik was doing his best to calm her down)
Manik:-Ur my star naa please stop crying.
Nandini:-Manik m sorry I could not protect our love.
Manik:-Shh...sh...don't say that ever.U were u are u will  be my shinning star.
Mukti:-Sorry Nandini we were just pulling ur legs.
Manik:-Do u both have any idea to what extent she loves me n  u both chose to  make fun of it.
Alya:-Manik we r relly sorry but we didn't meant to hurt her.Nandini we r relly sorry.
Manik:-For this I'll never forgive u guys.Her cries r piercing my heart.
Nadini:-Manik m sorry...m very sorry...
Manik:-Nandini look at me,u trust our love hai naa.
Nandini:-Very much...
Manik:-Then forget whatever u heard.
Nandini:-But...
Manik:-For me please.Now come chachi must be waiting for us naa.
Mukti:-Hum sabb bhi chale.
Manik:-Mukti rightnow m not in a mood to talk.
Alya:-Mukti he's hurt  so he needs a little space to understand.
Mukti:-I think ur right.
(Manan went to Nandini's place to have dinner.Chachi was preparing the chole in the kitchen.Nandini went to change her dress while Rishab n Manik were having fun time with each other.Soon Nandini came  n saw both Rishab n Manik enjoying each others coming)
Manik:-See maine abb mere saale ko bhi pata liya.Now next target is Chacha kyonki chachi toh already patt chuki hain.
Nandini:-Amms bhi baaki hai u moster.
Manik:-Unhe bhi main apne charm se pata lunga.Afterall no one can resist the charm of Manik Malhotra.
Nandini:-Its not that easy as u think .
Manik:-Relly??????????
Nandini:-Yaa...
Chachi:-Aree Manik beta tum aa gaye.
Manik:-Wao chachi chole ki smell itni acchi aa rahi hai.
Chachi:-Tum haath mooh dho kar jaldi se aajo khane ke liye.
Manik:-Yaa main abhi aata hoon.
 
Enjoyyy peeps.
 
Edited by Sandhirrocks - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
finally u update..
nice update...
continue soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: annachi

finally u update..
nice update...
continue soon..

 
 
 
Ya finally I updated.
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Posted: 8 years ago
awsm loved it
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Posted: 8 years ago
looks interesting...plz continue soon 
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Posted: 8 years ago
read all parts in ome go awsomeee pls continue aoon and please update lill fast