Originally posted by: DivanIshRES 😳😳😳
huhh finally unres...i read the update earlier as well but could not think of what to comment...i mean i had mixed feelings and didnt know how to put in wordsi would say the writing was obviously very good or beyond good but then to be honest it was not one of my favs and the only reason is the mood of the updatebut i do understand that this is how it has to continue as a part of the story
I know it's a heavy update for you as in you are a person who likes reading happy things and this update was not near that. So yea really sorry about it. Will try compensating in the next part. The next part really looks blaah 😆Raman's break down was too painful to read specially for people like me with weak heartsBhalla Ji was so sensible...the only sane person in the Bhalla family...he truly behaved like the head of the familydont think i am mad or something but i actually liked the jail moment too much
Rofl 🤣🤣. You are anyways pagal, abh kya hai ki mein naya sochun 🤣
Glad you liked it !!!!! Thank you 😳it was even more painful to read baby's suffering...badon ke jhagde mein us nanhi si jaan ko kya kya sehna pad raha haihow ruthless can mrs bhalla get...hospital mein bhi drama...but that's how it is...sometimes the hatred overpowers everything and one stops thinking logicallyIshita taking a stand for her son and back answering toshi ji was very niceit was good to see Raman realizing the reality finally and warning Param...he is surely back with a bang...and you wrote that particular section brilliantly 👏👏👏
Awww ..!! thank you so much and Toshi, i have no words 😆. She is just a lost caseand finally the confrontation and the confession...each word and every action from both of them was justifieddi the writing was absolutely perfect and i dont even have to say that...you know it alreadybas it was too much for me to take in...i hope some lighter moments are on the wayplease update soon
Lighter moments not sure but boring update on the way 😆. Thanks a lot 🤗
Originally posted by: aarohi26res
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seriously bolun toh mujhe samajh main hi nahi aa raha ki kya likhoon as this update was mixture of every emotion. and I completely enjoyed this one
so finally Raman is guilty on himself and punishing himself ofcouse by doing his favourite work 😉 thank god bhallaji still have some sense and he advised Raman to bring ishita back. actually yes, children are one who suffered most in parents rift.
Puttar's fav work is something else but at this situation yahin teekh hai 😆. Glad you found the update a combination of everything.
toshiji is still in her ego but adi cries melt his heart and he decided to bring her aur yeh kya????? both are landed in jail???? the whole one day was complete rolar coaster ride for them, aasmaan se gire khajoor mein atke 😆 but I liked his posesiveness for ishita. things are going in perfect way
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Possessive Bhalla is a treat to watch and I am missing that in the show. Oh coming to the roller coaster day, I go influenced by Maiyaa 😆😆
oh!!! poor adi is in hospital but at least ishra are together. thank god ishita didn't paid heed on anyone and Raman noticed creep param.
aaha...kya band bajaai hai uski maje aa gaye. old RKB is back. I liked is but please open his real truth in front of simmi and toshiji
Will bajaofy his band properly in the next part and thappad zaroor khayega 😳. Hamare pyaare param jee jo hai 😆
and finally confession is done but in completely unexpected way. Raman was full of passion possession. and I can't wait for next part. please update soon we all are waiting for next part
Updating in sometime dear. Thank you so much
Originally posted by: Sri1091Poor adi in sab ke beech mein vusko kya hogaya even now toshiji and Simmi are hell bent to curse Ishita rather than pray for adi and also I don't understand dis toshiji what does she know abt Param??? She is ready to believe him whom she just observed or know for 2 days ?? And Ishita whom she knows for d past 1 year Ashe doesn't want to believe her???? Only their fathers are sensible about d situation even after seeing ishita's state Raman still has dilemma of what happend??? I am really not at all liking dis raman and dat creep Param will never change even now he is eyeing Ishita?? Please continue soon now I want to see how Ishita will react I really don't want Ishita to forgive Raman dat easily
Originally posted by: ayezarahmatawesome update may raman take ishu wid him with her self respect and dignity which is ruined by cheap parameet
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