New SS: Fighting till the End Update Pg 2

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Posted: 8 years ago

Prologue


Guys, please tell me how you like it, and I am planing to make it a shory story, so do let me know...!!



He stood up with all the strength he had left in his body, without dropping a tear... And walked up to the man who sat laying down on the floor, crying with sorrow...


There he stood in front of the one thing that brought back nothing but her, and her memories...  He closed his eyes and the day flashed back... The first time he saw her... She was all set in her ghagra choli, enjoying the beats of the drum on the first auspicious day of the Gujju Festival, Navratri...!!


She was moving her hands up and down, while her hair swayed perfectly and simultaneously to the movement of her body... He noticed her, she stood out from everyone, she was someone who didn't care and just did he steps the way she liked them...


He shook his head and then walked up to  the water stand to grab a glass of water... He did not feel her approach, but soon he felt a tap on his shoulder...


"Excuse me, Can--- I--- ..??"


"Oh, Ya, sure" he said handing her the glass...


And soon enough appeared the idiotic Kunal..!!


"Tum, meri partner banogi... please!!"


"Nahi, woh K-k-k-k unal...!!, mere paas par-part-partner hai...!!"


"Nahi, hai! Kahan Hai...!"


"Hai, na she said turning around to find the first person she could.."


And that first apparent person was him... " Ye, Yeh hai mera partner" she said grabbing his elbow, as he was witnessing the comedy scene between the two...


"Kon hai yeh...??" he asked


"Yeh, Yeh, Yeh YEH, mera husband, nahi, sorry sorry, yeh mera boyfriend hai, Iska naam Aayush hai..."


"Ppp---aarrr.."


"Aur next week hamari engagement hai!" she cut him off, and dragged him to the dance floor...


"Oh, hello, na hi mein aapko janta ho, aur tumhara boyfriend to bilkul nahi banana..."


" Oh, hello mujhe bhi koi intrest nahi hai tume.."

" Aur tum Mumbai ke toh ho nahi.."


"Nahi, tumhe kaise pata...??"


" Tumhari dressing, Garba Sense, and Akaal se.."


"What..??"


"In that case let's compare and know each other for the 9 day of Navratri..."


"Oh, Really...??"


" Ya, Since I am already named Aayush, you can be... ummm... Prishita...!" Edited by ArshaParsh - 8 years ago

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Posted: 8 years ago
Sounds intrstng
Really loved the proloug


For sure continue it

Would love to read it


Update soon
Wtng


Love u
Keep smiling
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Posted: 8 years ago
looks interesting..
 
Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Prishu 🤗 
Thats very interesting:D 
Do continue soon !!
Tysm for the pm sweets <3
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Posted: 8 years ago
Interesting
Prologue

Loved it
Wow
It's story at gujju navratri
My fav

Continue soon
I will surely read ur story

Thank u so much for PM :):)
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Posted: 8 years ago
Very interesting
Would love to read further
Do continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
if i m not wrong , it's inspired from TWIST WALA LOVE ( stry of rohan n rhea)..
but still its awesome!!
sandhir <3 ðŸ˜Š


Edited by priya_31 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Interesting... Concept
Update soon
Thank you for p.m me
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Posted: 8 years ago
its really intersting
luv to read further
pls continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
awesome prishi didu
twist wala love se track uthaya?
atleast thoda sa??
jo bhi h awesome h...conti FAST
LOVE
SANYU