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T3| ArHi FF Second Chances| Note and link to T4, pg 148 (Page 85)

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Posted: 20 June 2015 at 9:21am | IP Logged
Wonderful chapter 
Arnav - khushi's intimate scenes is written so passionately , it was not vulgar . Their passion is raw which they have banked inside them for over a decade . Khushi couldn't cross the line , she is restraining herself. She is convincing herself that being a widow certain lines should never be crossed . Its time she grabs second chance & live her life to the fullest , it doesn't mean she forget NK ,he will be very much alive in form of Meera . If she lets go off this chance she will end up crying alone when she grows old just like Manorama Ouch 

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Posted: 20 June 2015 at 9:56am | IP Logged
awesome update.. beautifully written... loved it Smile

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Posted: 20 June 2015 at 10:50am | IP Logged
just awesome... superb!
spectacular...

oh when will she accept him? the wait is too painful

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Posted: 20 June 2015 at 12:13pm | IP Logged
simply awesome. ...loved it...to core...

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Posted: 20 June 2015 at 12:59pm | IP Logged
fabulous update
Waiting for next part

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Posted: 20 June 2015 at 1:56pm | IP Logged
Such an amazing update! loved it.. hope to see them taking next steps together in understanding with no regret or guilt involved.. love Arnav for allowing Khushi to hold on NK.. 


thanks for pm Smile

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Posted: 20 June 2015 at 2:16pm | IP Logged
Every time after reading ur story I search in my mind for d phrasing words, but I utterly fails, it always (from d prolong, chapter one to till here) mesmerize me like how can a ff b feels so real n one which is very dear n near to my heart. Ur story is breeze in d hot summer which am welcoming with my opened arms. 
Manorama such a wonder lady, a sister, a daughter in law, a mother, a mother in law, a grand mother more over such a humorous kind lady. Words r mere for that beautiful character.

Our little sweet heart meera is a wonder kid, a miracle for her friend mohan, a priceless therapy for d disabled kid, a precious gift to ones life. Meera n mohan r very close to my heart coz I have a daughter of 7 year old n my sister daughter is 9 year, d elder kid is so caring n sharing towards my kid. Even my  sister daughter have made a friend in her class who have my daughter name n she proudly say that her friend has her sister name because of that she made her friend. When ever I read about meera n mohan it never seems like a tale for me. It is as close as my daughter n my niece bonding.

Abt arnav n khushi there is no hurry, de r d breeze which always soothen out body n sole, a breeze which shows d hopes, positive approach towards life.

Finall I thank to almighty for pushing me towards this beautiful story, keep continue ur great hard work dear, I wish u loth of strength n health for u so that we can enjoy this journey with our b loved couples with a trusted navigator (you).

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Posted: 20 June 2015 at 2:34pm | IP Logged
Intense... Thats the one word that comes into mind after reading this chapter.. Emotions that each character feel is very well scripted.. Waiting for more as story unfolds..

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