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T3| ArHi FF Second Chances| Note and link to T4, pg 148 (Page 8)

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Posted: 08 May 2015 at 9:34pm | IP Logged
great one, emotions narrated were awesome.
arnav is matured at the same time he knows how to flirt with khushi keeping his true gentleman character intact making khushi craving for more.
mohan is such a cute boy, giving half of his dad to meera, only an innocent child can think like this.
meera is such an adorable kid.

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Posted: 08 May 2015 at 9:35pm | IP Logged
loved the update 

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Posted: 08 May 2015 at 9:35pm | IP Logged
Loved it... Mohan is opening well to Meera... Very well written

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Posted: 08 May 2015 at 9:37pm | IP Logged


Mirabell,

This beautiful chapter as with each and every one so far in Second Chances had incredible atmosphere, heightened anticipations, beauty in simplicity. Loved the incredible atmosphere in the beginning, bird song and vehicle noises - exactly what my beautiful memories of Chennai are always redolent with...the filter kaapi in steel tumbler and Marie biscuits adding the necessary sweetness and authenticity to that scene...The bonding of all the three women who play such definitive roles in Arnav and Khushi's lives so amazing...it is true that bereavement and sorrow often bind people as closely perhaps more, as happy memories do.

The Arnav and Khushi bits,as the ASR in the show would have rightly said...kyaa boloon ab?! Unbelievable! Can some words start the heart beats of all your readers thudding and thrumming with anticipation along with Khushi's? Well, that for me was the whole impact of the scene in the bathroom...Arnav Singh Raizada towel mein...smirking as he is shaving...his adorable kinship with the kids...his blatant flirting with Khushi...haaye...ab kya hoga MB...and waiting ten days seems steep...please kuch karo...update thoda jaldee karne ke liye...pretty please? Waiting to see what this chapter was a 'Precursor' to!!Tongue

Best,

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Posted: 08 May 2015 at 9:48pm | IP Logged
MB..firstly you are the sweetest to give us an update as you have promised and thanks for lovely, fantastic, heartwarming and heart melting update!!

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Posted: 08 May 2015 at 10:06pm | IP Logged
Beautiful chapter.. Starting with manorama.. Wherever she is, she is reminded of her dear son.. It hurts.
The sisterhood of sorts.. Very nice
I loved how meera seems attached to arnav. Its his reciprocation that makes it feel bliss i guess.
The moments while he shaved was heavenly. Meera blabbering away and suddenly going into thoughts of her appa. But then mohan reminds her that she has half of his dad.. It was jusy soo emotional.
Loved it..

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Posted: 08 May 2015 at 10:23pm | IP Logged
You broke my heart with this sentence. "Naren...Tears marked their attendance at the sound of his memory, every single time". 

I can see how you are giving each and every character of this story a second chance. You are filling Mano and Madhu's emptiness by giving them a new companion, Sumithra. Meera,  a father and little friend. 

The conversation, Meera and Mohan had at bathroom was so touching. Mohan has such a big heart, He is so willing to share his father with someone who he just met. And he already gave half of him to her. You just saw us a glimpse of how their relationship is going to be. 

Arnav and Khushi, their relationship starts at tortoise speed. Arnav is all into winning her, but, she is holing back too much. But, I can understand her insecurities. 

Thank you for the notification. This is one lovely, touching and an amazing update. 

Looking forward for the next chapter. 


Edited by SharuAG - 08 May 2015 at 10:48pm

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Posted: 08 May 2015 at 10:31pm | IP Logged
Awesome chapter as always:) thanks

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