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T3| ArHi FF Second Chances| Note and link to T4, pg 148 (Page 78)

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Posted: 19 June 2015 at 1:50pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Chokri_ASR

Is it time yet... I am waiting my dear writer guru... Big smile

Main bhi waiting ki kataar mein hoon ...

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Posted: 19 June 2015 at 1:51pm | IP Logged
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Yes! Update coming up in less than 12 hrs! Embarrassed Heart

Aankhon aankhon mein baat hone do

Mujhko apni baahon mein sone do...Wink

Waiting for their talk and some hot hickey scenes. Embarrassed

YES!

I am in the hickey-demand brigade 


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Posted: 19 June 2015 at 1:54pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Arshi67

Originally posted by Chokri_ASR

Is it time yet... I am waiting my dear writer guru... Big smile


Main bhi waiting ki kataar mein hoon ...
wonder when the wait will be over.. Embarrassed
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Posted: 19 June 2015 at 1:55pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Chokri_ASR

Originally posted by Arshi67

Originally posted by Chokri_ASR

Is it time yet... I am waiting my dear writer guru... Big smile


Main bhi waiting ki kataar mein hoon ...
wonder when the wait will be over.. Embarrassed

Heh heh folks.. I promise it is on its way. Heart
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Manorama is woman of wisdom and strength.  She clearly understood that Kushi has her whole life ahead and she has to let Kushi go for her to have second chance with a man and another loving family. But it is easier said than done and glad to see the sister companionship between Manorama and Nandini.

 

Wow, that passionate kiss is sensual and mesmerizing. Their need to express and explore is divine. Kushi took her first baby steps towards Arnav without a push and finally Arnav and Kushi started the much needed dialogue about Kushi's guilt and insecurities. I am falling more and more for this Arnav. Just love the way he explained the morality of their relationship.

 



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I am so glad these two finally were able to give in to the tension that has been simmering just beneath the surface. You've built up to this moment so well, taking it layer by layer until they just couldn't resist it. Their chemistry has been explosive right from when he showed up on her doorstep. That palpable tension, the repressed memories all spoke to this fire between them. It was so passionate, and their desire was almost overwhelming in its intensity. I loved it! It was so unique to you- you did a really really really fantastic job. 
My heart broke for the two of them with that moment when he takes the rind and puts it in her fingers. There was something so poignant about it- despite how he feels about her, he showed in that moment that for him, it is about her. He proved himself to be stronger than the resistance she puts up, and that no matter what, he will be there. That is something incredibly special. Not everyone would do what he did- hell, almost no one would. But it speaks volumes to his character. 


I loved the emotions in this chapter- Manorama's difficulty letting go of Khushi was... uff. I wanted to draw her into a hug. Of all of them, she has the most difficult decision to make, and I trust that she will not let her happiness slip from her grasp. She may feel like she's losing Khushi- but Khushi isn't the kind to let go. 


I loved it!


Love always,
Choti.


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