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T3| ArHi FF Second Chances| Note and link to T4, pg 148 (Page 76)

ranjanatripathi IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 15 June 2015 at 4:48am | IP Logged
The story has been progressing amazingly well
the hesitancy on Khushi's part
yet how she is drawn to Arnav is amazing
it is as if she can't help it
and his persistence in wooing her...well if that is what we call
But his determination to not let her go...is what I love!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 15 June 2015 at 9:49am | IP Logged
Beautiful chapter...Lavanya is right that very few people gets second chance in life.

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Posted: 17 June 2015 at 10:18am | IP Logged
Loved the update
A heartfelt THANK YOU.

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Posted: 18 June 2015 at 1:50pm | IP Logged
one more dayEmbarrassed

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narmathabiju21 Senior Member
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Posted: 18 June 2015 at 9:28pm | IP Logged
You're amazing writer

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Posted: 19 June 2015 at 1:14am | IP Logged
mira darling how do u always take our breath away with ur beautiful writing dear..awesome update..ur meera and mohan are the two angels who always surprise us eith their actions..how they behave beyond their age..uff..god gifted angels...yes so true that children do teach us a lot...the pain meera withstood only to cheer mohan wow...superb...the scene in the swing arnav with his son mohan..too beautiful..khushi taking the pic of them..in that process arnav catching her..and arnav asking her to wait for him in the swing and that please following the question...wow..beautifully written...ur every conversation betwweem them arouse goosebmps mira...but why did u stop there only? u kepyt us hanging there only..my heartbeats are getting erratic along with theirs..
i guess the below song perfectly matches to arnav's pov right now..

Waaqif to hue tere dil ke baat se
Chupaya jise tune kayanaat se
Kahin na kahin teri ankhein, teri baatein
padh rahe hai hum
Kahin na kahin tere dil mein, dhadknon mein
dhal rahe hai hum
Tu har lamha tha mujhse juda
chahe door tha main ya paas raha..

Lab se bhale tu kuch na kahe
tere dil mein hum hi toh basein ya rahein
saansein teri iqraar karein
tera haath agar choo lein, pakadein
teri khwahishein kar bhi de tu bayaan
yahi waqt hai inke izhaar ka
tu har lamha tha mujhse juda
chahe door tha main ya paas raha...

hats off mira for this outstanding update..
thank you for the pm..

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Posted: 19 June 2015 at 5:36am | IP Logged
vow totally awesome update  
the feelings of arnav and he does not hide it from  kushi
the love for each others kids 
the strong bonding between them a perfect family
loved the minute details yu write the way meera took care of mohan also how kushi calmed mohan


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Posted: 19 June 2015 at 6:21am | IP Logged
MB, will we get an update late tonight????

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