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T3| ArHi FF Second Chances| Note and link to T4, pg 148 (Page 74)

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Posted: 13 June 2015 at 11:35am | IP Logged
No words to explain how much I loved loved this update!!! Meera and Mohan relationship really amazed me and it promises a stronger and healthier bond in the future. And I really love the idea of the big sister protecting her younger brother :) 
Arnav and khushi intense moments are die for and I can't wait to read more of those. Just wish for khushi to loosing up a little, I know it's hard on hEr but heart just wish :) 
 Really hope she make the first attempt sometime :) 
Can't wait for their night talk to continue :) 

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Posted: 13 June 2015 at 12:17pm | IP Logged
This was an amazing update!!!
I loved the way yo have built the relationships round your characters. 

Mohan- Khushi: Loved how you portrayed the sense of touch here. His acceptance of touch as a measure of his progress.

Meera- Mohan: I have no words for them. Bless them!! Babies are such love. Arnav and Khushi must be proud parents. Their babies are growing up!! 

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Posted: 13 June 2015 at 12:19pm | IP Logged
I am, as usual, at a loss for words ... to appreciate a story of such exquisiteness, poignancy and profundity.

The subtle play of emotions; the magnanimity of characters, the undercurrents of hesitancy and the power of love ... were so impeccably brought forth in this update!

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Posted: 13 June 2015 at 1:39pm | IP Logged
Ohh my god!!! I can't believe u stopped there.. How cruel of you to keep us hanging at the edge.. U are definitely going get a dhishum from me.. 
Anyways the update super duper awesome.. Kids are really amazing.. Meera I jus love DAT Lil girl.. So much maturity.. So sober n understanding.. She will be a great sis to Mohan.. N its good he is warming up to khushi n meera.. Jus one added plus point to them..

There is so much progress with arnav n khushi.. Really happy.. I feel sad for arnav.. It must be so much diff to handle a child on his on being a man.. Khushi n arnav are made for each other..

N lavanyas call was on right time . DAT piece of advice was so needed at this time.. She is confused so wat better than a friend's pep talk..

Now m jus waiting for the next update.. Waiting is very diff u know Mirabells.. U gotta update by 20th.. No cheating plz..

Waitingggvv...





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Posted: 13 June 2015 at 4:36pm | IP Logged
Hi I really don't know how to describe this story.
Every update is so touching with all the little moments.

I am loving this story generally I leave long comments for something amazing but this is beyond Amazing.

Somehow I feel at loss of words to describe this story.
I love the names of the kids and place you chose for both these lovers to come together.

Khushi and Arnav have a lot more going on other than being lonely in this journey.
  
Arnav is such an adorable man and any woman would be happy to have him in her life.
You rarely find such loving compassionate guy who is so nice and warm towards his ex-wife and taking care of his son without a single complaint or self pity which people generally do when they are saddled with problems. The only thing he cares for his son to lead a better life.

Not to imagine the depth of feelings he has for khushi when they had been together only for a week unlike guys who forget and move on he has kept her in his heart which was clear when he went to visit her inUS. Even now he can't seem to see khushi in any pain the thought he put into arranging every little thing for her stay since she has landed in India. The way he cares for meera and even Nk's mom.


Khushi however I wonder seeing how her appearance was during college times se
seemed to be a traditional girl but had her share of fun in fact from what la said today she was totally carefree may be Arnav was someone whom she felt deeply connected to and thought they could never be so she did all she can to treasure the time she has with him
Which brings me back as to why did she think that way. 
why did khushi not see a future with Arnav but was ok with nk.
These 2 questions are important to understand khushi and where she's coming from.


Also now that she has a chance to embrace happiness why is she hesitant ? Is it just about nk and her loyalty to him when her heart and whole being is screaming to embrace happiness and accept Arnav and give life a second chance.

Though I felt after what was discovered about Maya the previous update you may want to show some space so there is no overflow of information but still don't delay it for long because we still don't know about what transpired between arshi themselves to drift apart the way they did.

So I would say it's going good but if there is too much space bet the past and present somehow that connect breaks. So please don't delay about the past because if it comes in buts and pieces in delayed manner its bit difficult to remember it altogether.

I hope you didn't get offended

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Posted: 13 June 2015 at 10:04pm | IP Logged
In one word, amazing. Your ff of this is simply amazing. Heart touching. I always look forward to read it, wait for the next chapter

Thank you for writing and sharing the beautiful story
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Posted: 13 June 2015 at 10:31pm | IP Logged
wonderful chapter...just love meera she is so so so lovable...how can you stop thr not fair now waiting for next chapeter update soon...wish to know there story in the past ...what exactly happened and how?
thanks 

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Posted: 13 June 2015 at 11:48pm | IP Logged

What a beautiful chapter Mira. Just like those sleeping children, with you, we can always recklessly abandon our concerns about the chapter or the storyClap.

I just love the way how even the small accidents are endearing the kids and parents alike, to each other. Everything about that kids falling incident showed how each one of them has built a relation based on their care and concern. Arnav's embrace, Khushi's care and Meera's help - they are building bonds that would last a long time. Now, isn't that what makes a family alreadyApprove.

With all that going on, it is only natural that thoughts would never let sleep come so easily for her. It was interesting to see how the new relationships are making the old ones feel a little strange for Khushi. She should be expecting more awkward moments going ahead.

It was good to see Arnav's bonding moments with Mohan. But, more impressive were his bold moves in the quest of getting his ultimate prize. Right from "I am all yours", grabbing her shoulder, biting her aka kissing her, not apologizing, or asking her to wait - true to this conviction, he is converting every chance into an opportunity for the inevitable.

Lavanya - It is hard to put a finger on what she adds to the relationship. For me, she is that fine line that make a finished task into a completed one. She is the exact burst of energy that Khushi needs whenever she thinks the end is a bit too fyoar. Khushi is blessed to have a conscious that she can talk to.          

After all that perfect setup and just when I was ready to settle down for the talk of their lifetime, I cannot believe that you left us high and dry with an absolute perfect cliffhangerAngry. Yes, time and I are both holding our breaths for you to put us out of miseryUnhappy

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