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T3| ArHi FF Second Chances| Note and link to T4, pg 148 (Page 73)

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Posted: 12 June 2015 at 6:14pm | IP Logged
MB, my comments on page 75.




Edited by canapoem - 12 June 2015 at 6:17pm

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Posted: 12 June 2015 at 9:22pm | IP Logged
Meera is the best child ever
Loved the conversation between la and Khushi...it was hilarious too
I wish Arnav heard some of it
Glad Khushi is accepting her feeling so,e what

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Posted: 12 June 2015 at 9:29pm | IP Logged
Superb part
Meera is a wonderful child...full of life and mature. Seeing mohan panic about his wounds she forgot about her pain and supported mohan in every way possible. Khushi indeed has all the reasons to feel proud of her daughter.
Arnav loves holding mohan close to his heart whenever his son let's him.  He is thankful to both khushi and Meera for helping him with mohan. He loves Meera very dearly and is worried about the little one just as much.
Lavanya is perfect friend. She motivates khushi to move ahead in life. She wants the best for khushi.
Continue soon 

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Posted: 12 June 2015 at 10:13pm | IP Logged
Beautiful chapter. I love your use of metaphors for scenarios. You are so talented at it. I find myself re-reading them several times finding new meanings in them.

I'm at a loss of words regarding Meera. What an amazing human being. She has such a large grasp of things being only almost 9. So aware of other people's feelings and her surroundings, better than most adults. Her care and sacrifice for Mohan was so heartwarming. NK and Khushi did good!

Arnav= Heart That's all I can say about him. The way he has been going about making Khushi and Meera his is just amazing. What a man!!! Day Dreaming

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Posted: 13 June 2015 at 1:41am | IP Logged
Amazing update. A perfect family where both parents are concerned for theor children. Khushi is getting closer to Arnav and is opening up to him. I hope she takes lavanyas advice on board.

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Posted: 13 June 2015 at 6:40am | IP Logged
This is just not fair MB.
You give us a HOT teaser and then leave us hanging.
I am not 'contente' at all!
Imagine how my poor ASR must be suffering!Wink
Hehe!

Loved the bit where they bond as parents.
And their hurt and pain when the kids are hurting.
Isn't the bond between a parent and a kid beautiful?
When our child is in pain, it hurts us more.
In fact this happens even when a child who is not our own is in pain.

Lavanya is the bestest!
Loved how she encouraged Khushi to take her life in her own hands and move on.
She absolutely needed this pep talk.
Hopefully this will work in Arnav's favour.( and indirectly ours)Embarrassed

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Posted: 13 June 2015 at 7:29am | IP Logged
One of the best aspects of this story is that Arnav & Khushi's love story - the second time around - is going to be not just about their feelings and acceptance of each other but of their individual histories and current realities - children and extended families.
You took a seemingly normal occurrence for any parent, a child's mishap and made it into a turning point for their relationship. Each parent taking care of not just their own offspring but that of their significant other's. The bond between Arnav and Meera is simply lovely. I know that a bond between Mohan and Khushi would take a while yet but there is the beginning of acceptance.
Arnav's description of his wait just tugged at the heart strings.
A beautiful update.

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Posted: 13 June 2015 at 7:59am | IP Logged
Wonderful chapter
Loved their family time tending to injured kids, Meera is a sweetheart
And loved lavnya's advise to khushi regarding certain sexy-dish

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