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T3| ArHi FF Second Chances| Note and link to T4, pg 148 (Page 72)

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Posted: 12 June 2015 at 11:43am | IP Logged
Updated Page 75
Mira, today i will tell you that this story is so close to the real life story of one of my very close friend and so every update is close to heart.


Edited by -Bhavi - 12 June 2015 at 11:51am

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Posted: 12 June 2015 at 11:50am | IP Logged
I'm loving this your story very much Mira for bringing into fore the complicated aspects in life that not everyone would encounter, but depicting those turmoils, pain and uncertainty that will be endured by those who do so well. 
Looking forward to their journey turning to a wishful side thru magic writing of yours.

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Posted: 12 June 2015 at 12:10pm | IP Logged
Really good update! Khushi is in a very confused state as she is thinking whatever is happening between them will be a good memories for her once she's gone back to her place... Arnav clearly says that he is all hers and will wait for her ever...
Loved the swing scene... Mesmerising! 
Meera is one such matured child... Glad that Mohan listens to Khushi, she will be a good mum to him...
Still I'm waiting to know why Arnav didn't come back to her ten years ago...why did they parted? Why Khushi didn't wait for him? 

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Posted: 12 June 2015 at 12:45pm | IP Logged

Amazing update and love it. You gave me jitters with that ear bite and sensual kiss WinkWink. Meera is one sweet and matured girl trying to impress Arnav LOL and making strong bonds with Mohan. Entire swing scene is very serene and romantic.


I love Lavanya characters a lot. Lavanya and Maya are two cupids of this story. Lavanya is always to the point and clears the fog in Kushi's brain. She is indeed Kushi's best friend. I hope Kushi follows her heart's desire and friends advice when the happiness is knocking on her door.


I have no words for Arnav. He is perfect gentleman, father, friend and lover. I hope his waiting will soon be answered and his life will be "hamesha" filled with "Kushi".




Edited by jduke - 12 June 2015 at 12:45pm

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Posted: 12 June 2015 at 1:01pm | IP Logged
What an update absolutely loved it

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Posted: 12 June 2015 at 1:07pm | IP Logged
such a beautiful chap... meera ..oh she is such a baeutiful child... mohan n khushi... than again arnav n mohan on the swing...
oh lav is such a perfect friend... love her... 
oh n the hickey convo was hilarious... i was wishing arnav overhear it Tongue
very emotional chap... love it...
n y did u have to stop there... how mean... 
i demand an update nowww

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Posted: 12 June 2015 at 1:22pm | IP Logged
Awesome chapter...Meera is a child any mother would love to have...it shows meera's maturity and her up bringing when she put her pain behind to give comfort to Mohan...no doubt khushi is proud of her daughter...Mohan also made progress when he listened to khushi and stopped crying and let her clean him...it is a good progress...Arnav and Khushi discussion as parents was very touching...they both shared the proud moments of their kids...would love to read more of Meera and Mohan...love lavanya too...she gives that push to khushi who is in confusion and dilemma about her next step...thanks for the PM

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Posted: 12 June 2015 at 4:57pm | IP Logged
Beautiful update Mira. I love how you incorporate small things of our daily lives in your story. Sight  of a sleeping child. Oh yes, it is the most wonderful feeling.  Sometimes we cannot believe when kids behave maturely than their age. It brings so much happiness to see your child grow. :)
Lavanya's support finally gave strength to Khushi to take her decision that she was so scared to take . 


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