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T3| ArHi FF Second Chances| Note and link to T4, pg 148 (Page 71)

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Posted: 12 June 2015 at 8:33am | IP Logged
I am sucker for children and I love Mohan and Meera in your story and cant get enough of them. The way Khushi calms Mohan down is just so touching and he responds to her! I cannot imagine how this would have affected Arnav, who knows his son so well and this would have been so difficult otherwise. And Meera forgets her own pain and hurt in seeing Mohan's reaction!
They are slowly getting more secure in their feelings for each other and you are building that up so beautifully. It is harder for Khushi with her feelings of loss and guilt. Lavanya, as always is the best friend a girl can have and gives Khushi just the right amount of gentle pushing the Khushi needs. 

Great timing for a cliffhanger :-) But the update is coming soon and so it will be worth it!

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Posted: 12 June 2015 at 9:23am | IP Logged
Meera  and Mohan have become good friends , did not expect the little girl to help Mohan bandage forgetting her pain . Only a child can think so selflessly , at this point Meera more resembled like khushi . Both the kids are bonding strongly .
Arnav is very much willing to grab the second chance , but for khushi she is hesitating , though the second chance is tempting she doesn't want to wander into the forbidden territory .
 

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Posted: 12 June 2015 at 9:25am | IP Logged
This was amazing...!!!!!! 
i love lavanya and her witty comments..!!
w8ng for next..!

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Posted: 12 June 2015 at 9:41am | IP Logged
I am liking these baby steps they are taking..
Meera is a big girl..Mohan can surely look up to her..She is so brave not to cry or wail out.

Lav surely giving the right nudges..;) And the awkwardness with her amma tells her story..

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Posted: 12 June 2015 at 9:44am | IP Logged
I hope sab kuch acha ho
La is so cool
I jus love her

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Posted: 12 June 2015 at 10:09am | IP Logged
Great work...
liked Kushi as parents there concern for their kids can be seen clearly...
somewhere i felt more than Kushi, Arnav needs Kushi more as he is hiding all his pain inside
lets see what happens next...

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Posted: 12 June 2015 at 11:23am | IP Logged
awesome update Smile 

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awesome. ..loved it..

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