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T3| ArHi FF Second Chances| Note and link to T4, pg 148 (Page 66)

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Posted: 11 June 2015 at 7:29pm | IP Logged
Mira...this update is just what I need. What a great stress buster
Beautiful update...i really don't know what to say. Always love everything about ur updates...


Edited by maina95131 - 11 June 2015 at 7:50pm

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Posted: 11 June 2015 at 7:55pm | IP Logged
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My apologies MB for a late unres. 
I love the gentle pace of your story and that Arnav is not in a tearing hurry to get his Khushi. I like the way he's giving her all the space she want's yet letting her know how he feels. He's also more sure about his feelings, willing to share more and open about his and maya's past unlike Khushi who's still recovering and discovering herself. Their love for teach other's kids is so genuine...and that will be the foremost bonding agent that will bring them closer. Of course, with a little help from La, Khushi will begin to accept the changes and her feelings. How will Manorama deal with this is something that we will have to wait and watch...
thanks for a beautiful story. love and hugs.


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Posted: 11 June 2015 at 8:08pm | IP Logged
Love every bit of this chapter, love how you kept us craving for more, love how Lav wants Khushi to grab happiness with both hands, love Arnav's hickey, love love and lots of love...what is wonderful chapter.

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Posted: 11 June 2015 at 8:45pm | IP Logged
Very very nice update...really happy with the Child's maturity

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Posted: 11 June 2015 at 8:54pm | IP Logged
La is right most people don't get second chances

Khushi needs to see that Arnav is her second chance at happiness

Arnav has already chosen his second chance, his Khushi

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Posted: 11 June 2015 at 9:07pm | IP Logged


Mirabell,

A dedication in your author's note on this blessed story? Thank you!Smile A happy fangirl today...of your incredible story, and the lovely show that gave us all those fascinating characters! Yes, an eternal fan of Arnav Singh Raizada and the actor who portrayed him...he did manage to make a hard-nosed anti Indian serials woman swiftly deteriorate into a pile of mush! 

Now for the chapter itself...something definitely soothing about the whole concept of being in between two phases of one's life...for me this chapter seemed to mark a transition...

For Khushi, she is perhaps at the cusp of accepting that she and Arnav are probably meant to be...if she will only allow herself to go that halfway to meet him. She might fool herself that she really is just storing up memories...but the fact remains that she is not going to be able to let go...not this time, though she probably was the one that instigated their last break-up after the one week of being together ten years ago...also an evolution in her relationship with her mother-in-law, I think. Their comfortable mother-daughter equation, which was more a security blanket for two bereaved souls is going to slowly but surely change...and perhaps, for the better, withArnav's presence in Khushi's life. This might slowly mature into something beautiful too!

For Arnav, watching his son open up in Meera'spresence and become a 'more normal' little boy, is perhaps a high that he wants to make a routine part of his life. He does say he has fallen unequivocally in love with Meera and her 'big sister' persona...and of course he implies, through his thoughts, words and actions how far gone he is when it comes to loving Khushi...so maybe a turning point in his life as well, making her accept and reach out for him. As he always seems to for her.

The scenes with the kids were picture perfect...could just imagine the whole action at the riverbank and the return trip home...also loved Lavanya's insights and humor...the hickey conversation so much fun...and her rooting for Arnav Sexy-dish Singh Raizada...go Lavanya - we are on the same side, girl!

Waiting for the next one now, writer jee...and in case we have not told you often enough...a master class story this one! Love it.

Best,

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Posted: 11 June 2015 at 9:10pm | IP Logged
what a wonderful chapter
loved it
i have a question for u ...if not sarun , who u prefer for the roles ...
just curious Wink

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Posted: 11 June 2015 at 9:18pm | IP Logged
Lovely chapter. Arnav has made his choice now she needs to make up her mind.I like the way you've written this story at an unhurried pace because second chances especially for people with children is not easy. I have two cousins who went through this (death of a spouse in both cases and remarrying widow/widower with kids) - it has worked out beautifully in both cases.
There's one question that's hovering in my mind - Manorama's take on the growing relationship. This may not be easy for her as she may feel insecure about her position in Khushi/Meera's life if there is a new man. She will need to take a giant leap to overcome this fear (maybe prod Khushi a bit) and accept Arnav for Khushi's sake if she truly believes in her "daughter"'s happiness. 

Khushi is not the only one here with misgivings. 




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