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T3| ArHi FF Second Chances| Note and link to T4, pg 148 (Page 55)

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Posted: 03 June 2015 at 3:47am | IP Logged
Fabulous update MB...
I really loved opening para somehow i look forward to read opening para than whole update...
Nani is amazing ...khushi might have idea what arnav wants but she is totally clueless about nani's intention...
Glad khushi wants to about arnav and arnav's life after they separated..
Parenthood frustrationLOL i think every parent reading this story might have experienced this...

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Posted: 03 June 2015 at 5:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Mirabell

Originally posted by kushikumari

 



This, right here is my inspiration!! What can one do after reading this? Gratified, overwhelmed, blessed, inspired, motivated and most importantly HUMBLED!

Thank you for saying it so evocatively!! _/\_ this is me attempting a namaste!
Namaste!

--MB

 
_/\_ Namaste!

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Posted: 03 June 2015 at 5:04am | IP Logged
interesting one.. near yet so far... far yet so near..

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Posted: 03 June 2015 at 5:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kizh72

And all those filter coffee references brings back the times when I have cribbed to my mom for not making me a coffee as strong as the one she made for my dadLOL At the risk of sounding blasphemous (in today's times, it can very well be!), nothing beats the south indian filter kaapi, starbucks be damned!

i second that!

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Posted: 03 June 2015 at 7:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kushikumari

Originally posted by kizh72

And all those filter coffee references brings back the times when I have cribbed to my mom for not making me a coffee as strong as the one she made for my dadLOL At the risk of sounding blasphemous (in today's times, it can very well be!), nothing beats the south indian filter kaapi, starbucks be damned!

i second that!

And to be drunk in a steel tumbler. 

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Posted: 03 June 2015 at 7:57am | IP Logged
Very Soothing ... And very calm just like the Sea..

This was amazing, conversations that are hard becoming easier when they their walking hand in hand... Just like Meera and Mohan..

Beautifully written.. Loving how your paving a new path for their journey!

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Posted: 03 June 2015 at 8:10am | IP Logged
Arnav is talking about his married life , seems like he was yearning for a listener like khushi to pour his heart out . Arnav is very cordial with his ex wife & him answering Maya's endless questions is irking khushi . Finally this girl has started reacting , she was more or less emotionless after NK's death . Love the way Arnav - khushi's relationship is shaping up .
A very mature concept , penned so well Clap

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Posted: 03 June 2015 at 8:32am | IP Logged
after reading this update first thing that got into my mind was... 
Aakarshan door jaane na de... Asuraksha paas aane na de...


Poor Khushi.. She is struggling hard to control her feelings fighting with her emotions. And being very close to Arnav .. Looking straight into his caramel orbs.. Peeking into his heart and mind is not at all helping her to be sane. Her heart is craving for his closeness.. Her mind is warning to keep herself away from him. 

She should have realized by now that her heart won over her mind long time back .. When she kissed him. She should have believed by now that he is throwing away all her insecurities.. Sorrows.. To the corner with his sensitive touch of love. 

When his heart flinched with pain.. Why she should feel bad for making him to feel pain. When his eyes spoke about the inner grapple.. Why she should have to feel to make him feel better doing anything. Why she wanted to know everything about him and Mohan.. Why she wanted to know what is the current relation between him and his ex wife... Isn't it called love or at least it is
 called feelings for him if love is a big word at their current state. 

One thing that one cannot control is their heart. It never listens to its owner.. It never stops beating for its loved one. It never stops craving for the love. 

But I am happy that she is taking her steps forward to reach that treasure by keeping her thoughts about NK at bay.. I wish she takes the remaining steps with more courage and love and grasps her second chance before it gets too late.

Nice update Mira.

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