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T3| ArHi FF Second Chances| Note and link to T4, pg 148 (Page 48)

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Posted: 01 June 2015 at 4:50pm | IP Logged
khushi seem to be jealous of maya and i myself also feel that she is intruding between khushi and arnav too much and on wrong time too 

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Posted: 01 June 2015 at 4:51pm | IP Logged
MB, I guess I can never get tired for praising your work. Thank you for this wonderful update.

I read it thrice and each time I felt that I was reading it for the first time. Your words and sentences run so deep that every word, phrase or a line leaves me in a kind of trance wherein I just want to enjoy the feeling, the moment forgetting everything else for time being.

Ways of life are strange indeed. These last 10 years has brought so many changes in the lives of these two. First from the explosive week of togetherness they shared, to the painful separation, to going different paths and finding love, marriage and parenthood, to losing their spouses either to death or divorce and then finally meeting again and today taking a walk to the river along with kids, I was overwhelmed with what fate has thrown at these two.

And today they talking a small walk as a family, made me realise that I just want to live in this moment for sometime and not think of anything else like Khushi's demons or her hesitation or society's rules and norms or any other thing.

I just want to relish this sweet moment, forgetting about the inner battles each one of them has to face in the coming days and weeks.

Sometimes living and enjoying such small moments is what all life is about.

Past has been lived, no one knows what the future holds, lets just live today whole heartedly and enjoy this wonderful moment.

Yeh lamha jee lene de...





Edited by canapoem - 02 June 2015 at 7:21am

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Posted: 01 June 2015 at 5:07pm | IP Logged
I forgot today was the update. I was having a stressful Monday and wanted to reread the last chapter and at the end I saw June 1st and felt like I hit the jackpot and quickly went looking and you were already updating :) my day just got so much better, thank you. It was such a sweet and beautiful and also an insightful update.  I don't know how you do it but despite how the story is progressing and at whatever juncture it is at, your writing itself is so soothing despite the varied emotions. It makes me so happy like I had a wonderful out of the world experience :). You said next update is January and I almost had a heart attack before I saw the 2015 and realized that it was a typo for June. Thanks for the wonderful update :)

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Posted: 01 June 2015 at 5:09pm | IP Logged
this chapter just made me go hawww. really. one of those perfect moments that i don't want to disturb... 

we didn't get the kiss, but the night is young and they have miles to go... no complaints, just a can't wait for the next part already!

beautifully written, mira. unbelievably beautiful... do you even know what i mean?

(will be back, not right now though)
kk


Edited by kushikumari - 01 June 2015 at 5:19pm

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samsung04 Senior Member
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Posted: 01 June 2015 at 6:09pm | IP Logged
Superb update
All v hav is confused kushi n clear ASR here:)

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Posted: 01 June 2015 at 6:15pm | IP Logged
Wow Khushi is jealous...nice...I hope she does something good...very nice update...

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Posted: 01 June 2015 at 6:26pm | IP Logged
Awesome update!!! Loved it!!! Poor Arnav he went through so much, Arshi made so much progress in this update!!!

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Posted: 01 June 2015 at 7:32pm | IP Logged
Your writing is awesome. The first para was mind blowing.  Khushi should learn to let go but it's difficult for her but Arnav will bring her out of the shell. That was an awesome update

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