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T3| ArHi FF Second Chances| Note and link to T4, pg 148 (Page 40)

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Posted: 26 May 2015 at 9:44am | IP Logged
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Posted: 26 May 2015 at 12:38pm | IP Logged
in your writing each and every word looks perfect as if they mend to be there. Very nice ...
let see the elders already have there thoughts running...these two grown up should understand...

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Posted: 26 May 2015 at 2:54pm | IP Logged
such a fantastic chap... absolutely lovey...mano has guessed too tht something is going on btw arnav and khushi??? and may be she approves?? for some reason i think nandini knows too
oh sumitra is awesome...she is always the smart one Big smile

oh loved the arshi scenes...absolutely beautiful...
oh n i loved the cat and canary reference for arnav Big smile
eagerly waiting for next!

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Posted: 26 May 2015 at 3:58pm | IP Logged
I love Manorama.. !! She is such an understanding mother in law. She isn't doubting Khushi. but is thinking about her future. We can also see what Sumitra saw, a family in making :) Beautiful update Mira..

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Posted: 27 May 2015 at 7:50am | IP Logged
Fabulous writing ... Love your Arnav he's tooo awesome!

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Posted: 27 May 2015 at 11:53am | IP Logged
What is it about darkness and conversations?
Strangers become friends...
Time and spaces don't matter...
Lives get intertwined...

So I sit and write
To a person who spoke to my soul,
Words fail to describe..
How your writing made me whole!

You speak of love, of grief, of loss,
Of moments time seems to stop!
You speak on levels so deep they are true...
And I just want to ask, ' girl who are you?'

Do you know the power your words have?
Do you know the magic your story spins?
Do you know you keep us waiting on every word?
You do know how our hearts to win!

You made ramble like a fool,
Half way through the story you made me drool!
Now I know why everyone's here
Girl, you've got us all glued!!!

Hey Mira, this story, this Second Chances is so beautiful that I've spent the last 3 days reading continously ( sorry sneak reading during work is a hard job). 

I love it ( If the peom above doesn't prove it already!!!) And I'm eagerly waiting for the 1st of June to res my place here!!!

Till your next update...

Much Love (your newest I think biggest Fan) 

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Posted: 27 May 2015 at 2:34pm | IP Logged
I am not really good with teasers. I don't think I quite know ... But Canapoem asked.. and I tried. If you don't like it, I apologize. 

Chapter 21:

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He deserved someone better, someone who could offer him the same, someone who had something to offer.


She recalled how he had drawn her out of her melancholy. He took her mind off of the ache that had settled in her heart since Amma left for Gwalior. She shook her head as she muttered to herself, He deserved someone who had something to offer, not someone who took all she needed and offered nothing in return.'


The next moment, she stubbed her toe on an upraised root and waited to crash land on the ground, as she braced herself. Instead she found herself slammed to Arnav's chest as he pulled her arms back saving her a fall. He wrapped his arms around her own and leaned her against himself.


"Are you okay? You need to quit talking to yourself."


Khushi's heart raced as she tried to catch her breath. "I am sorry." She tried to move away from him but his hold was firm. "Arnav," she turned her head towards him and found his lips in her line of sight.


Was he going to kiss her? Her eye lids weighed down...

There you go... I guess it was supposed to tease! Wink


Edited by Mirabell - 27 May 2015 at 2:42pm

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