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T3| ArHi FF Second Chances| Note and link to T4, pg 148 (Page 39)

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Posted: 25 May 2015 at 12:59am | IP Logged
How beautiful it is to read this story :)
Khushi's struggle with her conscience and her heart is so amazingly written Mira.
All the characters of this story make it such a beautiful canvas...very well conceptualized and writtenClap

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Posted: 25 May 2015 at 8:52am | IP Logged
Each time I read a new chapter in this story, I end up with a lump in my throat and a smile on my face.
I love the Arnav-Khushi moments!
And the Khushi -Manorama moments.
And the Meera-Mohan moments.
And the Meera-Arnav moments.
So, basically I love the story as a whole.
Loved and completely understood Monarama's apprehension at perhaps losing the one link to her dead son to another man. She is a good MIL, but is first and foremost Naren's mother. Khushi and Meera are her remaining family, and she is scared of a future without them.
What she needs to realise is that she will gain more family instead of losing.
For Arnav is a guy who always looks after his own.
loved the bit where Arnav provides Khushi his shoulder to cry on.
And he cheers her up.
Loved the scene with the children playing together while the parents were together on the swing and Sumitra was looking on. The ideal family picture.

I got a special mention! Big smile
Thanks a lot, MB.
Love you! Mouah! 

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Posted: 25 May 2015 at 11:16am | IP Logged
Wonderful update... N worth the wait...the entire thing had a feel good feeling...
Sumitra Raizada playing cupid that was cute...she seems so happy for Arnav and Mohan...

Even Manorama seems to have an inkling of what's happening between Arshi...

Khushi wanted to avoid Arnav and hence didn't want Manorama to leave...looks like things r happening too fast with her...

Like Arnavs fascination with her nose ring... Its so endearing... Loved the way he made her comfortable... To talk about NK...held her hand around the ring...these little gestures go a long way in a relationship... N finally managed to get her out of her gloom...

Sumitra saw them with their arms around each other... Was Khushi comfortable with that??

Looking forward to the next update ...beautiful writing...

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Posted: 25 May 2015 at 3:25pm | IP Logged
to me this story is about hope.
it gives me a warm fuzzy feeling whenever i read any of its update.

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Posted: 26 May 2015 at 2:52am | IP Logged
totally amazing update

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Posted: 26 May 2015 at 5:56am | IP Logged
Very beautiful story loved it a lot after so many days I hace commented and that was for ur beautiful story keep it up.

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Posted: 26 May 2015 at 6:27am | IP Logged
Very nice update Mira...
 
Thanks for PM
 
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Posted: 26 May 2015 at 9:34am | IP Logged
Mira, what a beautiful chapter! Loved reading each and every word of it! Love Khushi and Manorama's equation. Their conversation was very moving. It brought out and highlighted Khushi's deep rooted fear of loss really well.

I love your descriptions of the house( something I enjoy reading immensely) The Kadamba tree (I googled to find how it looked like :) backyard leading to river bank, the stoop, the shuttered windows...it all sounds heavenly. Your words painted a very clear picture in my mind...I wish to settle in a bungalow like this after retirement. I have about 30 years to convince my hubby :D

And ah...what do I say about your Arnav and Khushi. Your Arnav is a sweetheart and a thorough gentleman. Absolutely adore the way he's taking it slow and allowing Khushi to share all her innermost thoughts with him...including that of Naren.

Absolutely mind blowing updateHug

Can't wait for the next Heart

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