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T3| ArHi FF Second Chances| Note and link to T4, pg 148 (Page 30)

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Posted: 22 May 2015 at 7:13pm | IP Logged
Beautiful update..
Its definitely not easy to forget our loved ones and move on. It takes time. Khushi too has same problem. Its not an easy task. I guess Manorma deliberately went leaving Khushi with Arnav. May be she wants her to move on. I love both the kids.. they are so cute and adorable..
Loved the update...   

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Posted: 22 May 2015 at 7:34pm | IP Logged
I love the way you write! 

The anguish and fear of khushi she's afraid but rightfully so and sumitra is one hell of a grandma (most of them are
:P) she sees things which are hidden to many it reminds me of a line" That Children and Old people see things which are invisible to the rest of the world"

Meera and mohan are adorable love how they are being themselves and are kind of a catalyst for our favourite couple. 

The conversation was beautifully written and I love the fact that her tears were replaced by her smile and twinkle in her eye:) 

So there's a date coming up?! Yipee and a riverside throwing stones hehehe soo exited.

Is manorama also seeing the signs and has decided to be a catalyst too?? 

Waiting to read more!!

Love,
Sum

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Posted: 22 May 2015 at 7:50pm | IP Logged
It's not easy to let go ,and lose your best friend cum confidant  that's what's NK was to khushie and her fear that whoever she loves leaves her ,and you shown it beautifully and how mature Arnav is that he wants her to open up to him. 

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Posted: 22 May 2015 at 8:04pm | IP Logged
fabulous update.. loved it..

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Posted: 22 May 2015 at 8:43pm | IP Logged
awesome update... beautifully written.. loved it Smile

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Posted: 22 May 2015 at 9:07pm | IP Logged
hi i msorry but i dont know what i like more the beautful ndignified characters u have written or your story in short i love it thks for updating

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Posted: 22 May 2015 at 9:15pm | IP Logged
Sigh I was all set to revisit taj from your eyes but I guess all good things does not come easily.
There I said it now and so will be able to talk about update.

Mira I have a big smile when I read about the seniors in your update. Today Sumitra was on roll. She was just happy seeing hire son happy and naughty. Keeping her fingers crossed she is wishing for that perfect family that she witnessed in the last scene. 

The kiddos as always were the ones full of energy. Today Mohan joined  Meera and him accepting Meera is a welcoming change for everyone. I am happy that you have not shown Meera as a complaint child who complaints about anything. 

I am glad that despite her fears Khushi found solace in Arnav. The convo about NK was beautiful. How tactfully did Arnav articulate her from tears to smile - shows that Arnav is a gem of person.Big smile

Today we had a glimpse of khushi's fear about how she is afraid of people leaving herOuch. My heart went for her when she was convincing Manorama to take her with her. For once I too wished that she  does not leave her alone.

Stage is set now Mira with seniors gone does it mean we will have more Arshi next time?


Edited by -Bhavi - 22 May 2015 at 9:23pm

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Posted: 22 May 2015 at 9:17pm | IP Logged
Beutiful just amazing thanks for early update can't wait to read more thanks

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