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If you wish for your dreams to come true, they will... isn't that a saying?
Well I think, in Second Chances there is a possibility for that to happen. Every character in this journey has a wish, along with the readers... And this update has given me hope for that to happen.
This update starts and ends with the matriarch, Sumitra Raizada, which was brilliant, by the way. I loved it, but what I loved the most, was her thoughts, the mindset in which she observed and played her cards to perfection at the dining table. Getting us all what we wanted. Arnav and Khushi along with the kids to be together, the four of them. And oh how beautiful was that sight at the end as she watched them. That is officially embedded in my mind. the perfect family.
Those kids, I simply adore them. Meera eating pooris for me was a image of mini Khushi. And our dear Mohan, look at him... making progress. That little boy is so close to my heart. I am loving how you are showing how children have a way of healing. Excellent job.
Now what I found so touching, and yes you got me teary eyed, yet again... Was this statement which I shall quote you my dear writer guru.
It just says so much. For both Khushi and Manorama this is not easy at all, one can't just walk away without the other. They need each other. I really felt for Khushi, my heart broke for her. All her life she has had people she loved, leave her. And BHAM... It's clear. Khushi is afraid of moving forward because she doesn't want to forget NK, she doesn't want to lose her Amma. And rightfully so.
Last but not least, our man Arnav. Damn woman you had me in a mush reading this update. He is perfect, bas. The way he took Khushi's hand placing it back on the ring was absolutely touching and telling. He really wants to do this right. And he will, I know it.
Soon Khushi will too, and for that I shall wait and let you unfold this journey for us.
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"The more sand that has escaped from the hourglass of our life, the clearer we should see through it."
And Sumitra Raizada is as perceptive as they come. Especially where her family is concerned. Charmingly manoeuvring the situation oh so guilelessly.
Arnav with a smug look on his divine visage ... sweet dreams are made of this ... I'm certainly not one to disagree ;)
The conversation between Manorama and Khushi was wonderfully done Mirabell. The way you showed the shift in tone, the deeper meanings in all that they said to the other, the underlying insecurity in both, the way her maternal instinct jumped out, all an absolute pleasure to read. An elemental shift in Manorama here, I thought. It makes you feel for the mother in her even while applauding the mother in law. "Bittersweet" indeed.
"He caught her hand gently and raised it to the ring, closing his fingers over hers so she could hold the ring."
This was such an incredibly moving moment. For me, more poignant than a hug or a kiss. (Uh please don't take that to mean I don't want those!) But the understanding shown here is what made me melt. I was smiling tearfully as I heard Arnav recount what Meera had spoken about her Appa. This entire scene once again shows what a brilliant job you're doing in showing how Khushi is slowly opening up. A bruised sunflower, once again responding to the rays of warm sunshine.
And Charu ... always ...
Meera is Meera
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