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T3| ArHi FF Second Chances| Note and link to T4, pg 148 (Page 19)

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Posted: 13 May 2015 at 9:42am | IP Logged
Congratulations on reaching a new thread!!! The update was simply brilliant :)
Loved the conversation between meera and mohan<3. Looking forward for more from you :-)

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Posted: 13 May 2015 at 10:46am | IP Logged
Very nice update Mira...
 
Please PM me when you update..
 
 
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Posted: 13 May 2015 at 11:14am | IP Logged
I don't know if you intended this chapter to tickle our funny bone, but it certainly did mine. There were so many cutesy moments with Khushi reverting back to a teenager with a crush. 

I have to say that you are one of those rare writers who can easily shift from one intense emotion to another in a heartbeat in the same scene. This was especially illustrated while Khushi was walking towards the master bathroom. Here are my reactions:
-giggling along with Khushi imaging Arnav with a moustache
-Introspective at the thought of being able of travel as fast as our thoughts do. If only...
-naughty naughty thoughts when Khushi glanced at the bed. Please, do act like an adult ;)
-aww-ing at the oh so familial bathroom scene
-heart melting into a pile of mush when Mohan "gave" half of his papa to Meera...this kid, yaar...just amazing
-back to hormonal teenager after giving us an imagery of Arnav clad only in a towel...mmhmm yum! 

By the way, I loved how Mohan indirectly became Cupid when he took Meera's hand at the end and gave Arnav the chance to offer his hand to Khushi. 

Once again, fabulous update!

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Posted: 13 May 2015 at 12:27pm | IP Logged
Fabulous updat as usual !

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Posted: 13 May 2015 at 12:49pm | IP Logged
Awesome Update!! I cant thank yo enough for writing this FF, it always bring smile to me whenever I read your FF.

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Posted: 13 May 2015 at 4:04pm | IP Logged
Beautiful update! Loved the way arshi's is coming closer... Sweet moments between them.
Mohan is accepting Khushi slowly...meera  is very understanding...  
Waiting for  chapter 20. Pls update soon

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Posted: 13 May 2015 at 4:13pm | IP Logged
Just found this - what an achingly beautiful story. Loving it. Thanks.

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Posted: 13 May 2015 at 5:07pm | IP Logged
The next update is ten days from today - May 18th.


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