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T3| ArHi FF Second Chances| Note and link to T4, pg 148 (Page 17)

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Posted: 11 May 2015 at 6:33am | IP Logged
I am falling more in love with Mohan each time I read an update. Meera is cute too, but there is something about Mohan. A little child with parents who are separated, still has the compulsion to share his beloved "papa" with this girl that he found some affinity with. That really touches my heart!
Of course, Arnav and Khushi moments are a joy to read as always. And this is a precursor to ...

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Posted: 11 May 2015 at 7:37am | IP Logged
Sorry Mira for commenting so late..
Loved the update.. Mohan is such a sweetheart..he is willing to share his papa with Meera..I hope that day comes soon when ASR becomes Papa for Meera..

Arnav is such a tease.. already waiting for next update ;-)

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Posted: 11 May 2015 at 9:39am | IP Logged
everthing is perfect in this part... Manorama with her inner feelings of emotions about losing her only son Naren  bounding with Nandini bua n Sumitra, Bua getting emotional about her meet with Kushi after her parents death n Dadi's thoughts perfect. 3 old ladies trying to get solace in each other company.
Arnav as always naughty once Kushi is there...

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Posted: 11 May 2015 at 9:41am | IP Logged
I felt as if I was eavesdropping the conversation between the seniors in Raizada house in Mathura. Their comfort level in communication shared by common grounds of grief, loneliness and taking care of their children and grand children did wonders and Mira to me it was nothing less then eavesdropping the conversation between my MIL and her friends. The conversation was so live and naturalClap 
Today we had some insight on Khushi. No wonder she is afraid of losing beloved. Ouch Imagine the trauma of that child who have witnessed such an accident but what gained my attention was NandiniThumbs Up she did not quit. She found her. How much grief and loneliness is she destined for? 

Mira your Meera brings a smile always whenever she is around and now coupled with Mohan I had this big grin on my face while reading this update. Mohan ready to share his dadShocked I guess its a big thing for the person with that disabilityErmm but then it shows how much he likes Mira and wants to be around with her. I could feel the pain of the father that could not touch his child and had to do with someone's else child Ouch and then the surprise of Mohan touching Khushi briefly was not missed either. Khushi is professional and Arnav is a father but what gave me a smile was the level of understanding of Meera who had all the patience for MohanClap

ASR in moustache like his ancestors LOL both mom and daughter think alikeLOL  and for a moment we got the glimpse of the child in KhushiBig smile. Khushi after a long time slept well and hope that she gets more reason for that good night sleepTongue. She wants to act up all ADULTShocked as if that is even possible with her hormones  LOL but again nice try Khushi whereas the man is on mission - Mission Flirting. Day Dreaming Day Dreaming  He also confirmed with Meera that he is not going to allow to let her go nowParty was more like telling Khushi then Meera. 

 Lets see how will Khushi try not to get involved with this man now? Will her senses be overruled by her rational thinking or will she be compelled to take this second chance that she has got in her life - Only Mirabell can confirm that and she is doing a damn good job at it Big smile




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Posted: 11 May 2015 at 10:49am | IP Logged
After the night before's incident,Arnav is assured of their mutual attraction.Though I am a fan of eternal love,I feel cracking chemistry is a very important part of a relationship.This is the kind of spark that you brought to surface between our beloved ArnavKhushi.Thanks.
The three women who have loved and lost family found solace in each other's company.Age old wisdom prevails as all accept that life goes on and we look for happiness never the less.The morning tea was truly touching.
Khushi having a good night's sleep is just another indication that she has finally come home.Though she will not accept it easily.The bathroom scene is so natural.Mohan must have sat like that many times with his father shaving in the bathroom and how easily he has included Meera at the same time insisting on sharing his Papa with her is a very big step for Mohan.Arnav has finally found a child he can openly hug and embrace as a father(figure) in Meera
All these declaration of war are sooo romantic and I know Arnav will woo Khushi at the same time putting all her demons from the past to rest as well as accepting Naren's love and Meera as a part of Khushi's life.We have already seen that Arnav has a magnanimous heart in the way his relation with his ex-wife is not only very friendly and understanding but enriches his life and that of all involved.

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Posted: 11 May 2015 at 10:50am | IP Logged
fantastic update... oh i love meera and her interactions with everyone...
Arnav...stay firm and dont let khushi go this time Smile
eagerly waiting for next!

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Posted: 11 May 2015 at 11:39am | IP Logged
Mira, my comments on page 8.



Sorry for the late unres, last weekend was really busy and wanted some calm and peaceful time to write the comments.


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Posted: 11 May 2015 at 2:24pm | IP Logged
awesome update loving arnavs approach

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