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T3| ArHi FF Second Chances| Note and link to T4, pg 148 (Page 126)

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Posted: 01 August 2015 at 1:27pm | IP Logged
I have finally managed to come across your ff..and its got me soo hooked that within less than 24hrs i finished all of it.

I hope you realise your blessed in terms of writing, the right words the right narration. Iam loving this journey. I just have a request can you give us insights to their past a little more elaborately.

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Posted: 01 August 2015 at 4:33pm | IP Logged

Mira
Wonderful update Big smileClap
Loved the cute interaction between Arnav, Khushi and Meera.
The kids Meea and Mohan are such a darlings and they really have come very close to each other like siblings. They formed a special bond and they are so sad because their trip came to ending and Meera and Mohan do not want to separate from each other Cry
Loved Mohan's reaction to his father's joy and his innocent desire to see him remain that way always melted my heart :)
I was so touched by Mohan asking his papa permission to let Meera stay at his place Smile
My heart went out to Meera when she said "I miss you lots and lots ASR"Cry
I hope Manorama realises that Khushi and Arnav are not only friends but they have feelings for each other and Meera also don't want to stay away from Arnav and Mohan, hope she don't feel bad about it and helps Naani in bringing them together.
Loved flirty Arnav and naughty Khushi and their banter WinkEmbarrassed
Arnav and Khushi reminiscing about their mortar bike ride sounded so interestingEmbarrassed.   Can't wait to know more about it Wink
Waiting for next update





Edited by sudhareddy - 01 August 2015 at 4:37pm

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Posted: 02 August 2015 at 2:17am | IP Logged
Hi Mira
In tough times one has to be blessed to have a friend like La.
Thank u for portraying La,who is definitely a anchor to khushi.
What a friendship.
Wish u a happy friendship day Mira.

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Posted: 02 August 2015 at 7:28pm | IP Logged
Mira ... I love the sensitivity with which you are handling the situation between 
Arnav and Khushi here ... I know that it isn't easy to just move into another relationship 
easily specially if the previous one had been so fulfilling ... like with Khushi ...
Meera has realised what she has been missing living with a single parent ... 
the importance of having both a mother and father around making it a complete family ... 
Mohan too has become aware of things in his own way ... like seeing his father happier ... 
and having someone nearer his own age to communicate with ... 
Slowly even the elders are getting aware of the fact that both A and K could have happier 
and complete lives with each other ... Tongue
And I have a feeling that only once Khushi goes back realisation of the need to be together 
will dawn on them both ... 

Waiting ... Day Dreaming

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Posted: 09 August 2015 at 12:14pm | IP Logged
this is an amazing story!!!
i am sooo glad to have come across it!!!
wow!!
please update soon!!

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Posted: 10 August 2015 at 8:00am | IP Logged
Hope you are doing good and all is well.

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Posted: 10 August 2015 at 8:47am | IP Logged
Hi Mira,
Are you back in State?

when are we getting an update or a teaser?

If you are still enjoying ur holiday, just try to enjoy ur holiday... We will wait for you...


Edited by SharuAG - 10 August 2015 at 8:47am

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Posted: 10 August 2015 at 9:40am | IP Logged
I have missed, missed, missed this, MB!

I loved how you set the whole scene. Arnav and the kids being watched by Khushi, who is again being watched by Manorama. 
There's these three people, trying to figure out a solution, trying to find reason, trying to understand relationships, wanting to shape their futures in ways they think are right. And I'm so excited to find out what life has in store for them. To watch them go the way their stars take them. 

You know, there's always one portion of every chapter that really calls out to me, makes me pause and retrospect, or simply just delight over the beauty of those words, the picture it creates. I save those words in my Notebook and today, I've found another set to save.

"It seemed to Mohan that his Papa laughed and smiled more now than he did ever before. His eyes took in the laughter lines on his Papa's face as he fussed with Meera's bandages. Mohan decided that he liked that his Papa was happy. But he didn't know what made him that way. He looked at his Papa and gave him the same smile, copying what he saw on his Papa's face. He could see that that made his Papa even more happy. Mohan was pleased with himself."

I keep reading the words and they keep making me happy. I wish someday you would write about children, just children. I love how you see their world and how you present it to us.

Your words give me immense joy and that MB, is me telling you, you are one kickass writer. 

How was your trip? You back? Have missed you! Smile

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