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Mirabell! You are a great writer, Dammit! 😉
I was lucky to discover this story and I have to admit that I enjoyed every moment of it.
Once I was back home , in order to get rid of this annoying jet lag, I tried to seek refuge in IF and I came across this wonderful awesome story of yours. I admit that I often lingered while reading a chapter and sometimes I felt so overwhelmed of the expressed feelings between Arnav and Khushi that I had to put aside this story for a few days.
I happened to read a sentence over and over to absorb and to feel its huge and subtle beauty. God! you write beautifully, dammit!
I was in the middle of your story that I felt that nagging urge to visualize what I was feeling at those specific moments. Then I made that banner, the one I have sent to you, and since, your Arnav and Khushi seem more alive and tactile to me.
Enjoy the rest of your trip. I fell in love with your motherland, India even though I just spent one week there for the first time. Please come back full of energy and keep on writing your beautiful story.
Thanks for sharing your wonderful thoughts and imagination with us.
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