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Mirabell,
You surpassed yourself with this update as always. Keeping pace with Arnav and Khushi's walk, I read the chapter slo...o..wly. After all, we now have to wait ten days for the next update. So,Ike some exotic dessert, I tried to relish it at a more leisurely pace this time!
Beautiful...the build up to the walk, Sumitra Raizada's impatient restraint, the children's enthusiasm to be off and away, Arnav and Khushi's losing themselves in their own thoughts...and then the walk itself.
So well narrated...their coming together one moment, their breaking away the next. Their relationship and feelings for one another wax and wane like the moon...in keeping with Khushi's thoughts...
So, we did not get the kiss and intimacy, but certainly progress on many levels for their relationship itself as Arnav opens up to her, and Khushi sees his pain. She also realizes how simple it could be to just embrace life and love with this man...and ah, a discordant note with Maya goading Arnav on...Khushi is so jealous...loved that aspect though I cannot help wonder if Maya has completely made her peace with her decision to separate from Arnav. Does she want him to continue yearning for what they may have had? Or is she simply a friend trying to help him find his soulmate? Hmm...
In all, I loved it through and through...will leave the steering of this ship in your capable hands, as we chart course for new waters...and they move on in their relationship.
Waiting!
Best,
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