T3| ArHi FF Second Chances| Note and link to T4, pg 148 - Page 27

I love how sensitively you've handled this story. The situation at hand is difficult for both Khushi and Manorama. It's tricky for Arnav, and Meera has yet to realize what is actually happening here. I wish more people were like Manorama, it's difficult to watch Khushi move on, but she realizes that she needs to push her in that direction for Khushi to have a second chance at happiness. For Meera to have a father again. That was the most touching part in the whole update for me. She's an amazing woman. 

You have such a way with words it seems magical...

Nice update... loving the bond between Meera-Mohan... these kids are so adorable... ArShi convo is beautifully written,  loved his willingness to know about NK... nd Manorama-Khushi convo too... khushi is lucky to have her in her life... last but not the least, now naniji too is dreaming again for her granschild's happy future, its lovely to see... waiting to see ahead...

No words to describe. It is so beautifully  written.

Hey bells.. Loved the update.. Thanks for PM..

I liked how you showed or at least hinted to the inner turmoil Manorama is going through. She can clearly see how drawn Khushi and Meera are towards Arnav. Another man who is not her Naren. This can't be easy.

She is aware that Khushi is still a young woman with a young child and that both yearn for the person they have lost. And here is this other man who is clearly attached to her daughter and grandchild. Someone who could take all their pain away. The part when she watches Meera and Moham was on point. It pretty much expressed all what I wrote in just that short of a scene.

The other poignant part was Arnav and Khushi's talk about NK. Him helping her hold onto NK's ring says so much which I can't put into words. I hope she realizes that Arnav doesn't just want her to move on like it's no big deal.

Awesome! loved it.. 😊

Beautiful update
Loved Meera & mohan and changes in mohan due to meera's company

Dear mirabill, first of all thank u very much for d pm. I am a new reader of ur story n now totally in love n addicted to d story, while reading I only humbled that let d chapter doesn't end. So awasomly written. N all d characters r so well/good in there own place. Even khushi is married to NK (being them husband n wife) it never felt awakword. 

Hi!! I started reading Second chances recently. Its one most soulful piece of fiction I've read. The amount depth you have provided for every character, to every relationship is just amazing.