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~Revenge~ Updated Chapter-14 on Page 140 THREAD CLOSED (Page 8)

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Posted: 09 May 2015 at 1:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ...Shefa...

Originally posted by Monucute

Originally posted by ...Shefa...

hi
how r u?
congratulations dear
continue soon
it sounds really interesting ...and i am really excited

hello shefa
f9 darling... N u?
Thanks dear...

I AM FINE DEAR
PLZ CONTINUE SOONBig smile
will update today only pls read the note with prologue ... Its a request dear

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...Chapter - 1...

"Jalal..." she sobbed
like a kid infront of him with blood
dripping from corner
of her swollen lips...
Jalal wiped the blood from his lips and goes near his bride, sit on his toes to match her eye level...
"tch tch tch..." and put his hand forward to lift her face up... Jodha crawled backwards from this terrifying and hazardous monster now her husband... But jalal being jalal grabbed her face ruthlessly, dug his nails in her soft chubby cheeks... Jodha let out an audible cry...
"dard hua??" he asked with artificial concern...and there the barriers got broken... Tears are out again... She nodded in a yes... He smirked and pressed it more tighter this time...jodha winced in utter pain... She caught his hand and tried to free herself... She was trembling and shivering badly in fear... Pain was clearly visible in her eyes... But the demon infront of her didn't even buzzed a bit by this innocent soul's pain...
"lea... Leave...leave me...jalal" she tried to speak in his harsh clutches... "leave you... Darling how can I?? I think you are the one who had FORCEFULLY tied me with you... Don't you??" he asked with blood shot anger filled red eyes... With this his grip on her face become more tighter...
"aaahhh..." she hissed again... "jalal jus...just hear me... Hear me once...pls" she pleaded while sobbing... "shut up... Just shut up you ugly woman..." he roared
She looked at him with the amalgum of pain and hurt...
My own husband find me ugly... She thought with utter bitterness for herself... He clutched her hairs tightly ... She closed her eyes as tightly as a human can to absorb her tears and pain...
But he was damn angry and doesn't know what is he doing and how his actions affecting his new bride...
So he dragged both of them towards upstairs...

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Edited by Monucute - 09 May 2015 at 4:28am

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Posted: 09 May 2015 at 4:37am | IP Logged
wow dear very nice update but itna chotu sa please next time long chappy dijyega please update soon eagerly waiting.

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Posted: 09 May 2015 at 4:45am | IP Logged
nice update 
but chotu sa

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Posted: 09 May 2015 at 4:48am | IP Logged
awesome..update soon dr..

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Posted: 09 May 2015 at 4:54am | IP Logged
awesome update
why jalal behaving like this?
update soon

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Posted: 09 May 2015 at 5:47am | IP Logged
Nice chapter monu
jo married jalal forcefully???
how,why ?
why is jalal bejaving like this
continue soon
thanks for pm

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I think this is my 1st cmnt on this story. 1st sorry 4 not cmnting lately.loved d prologue and chappy 1 continue soon Neetu

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