~Revenge~ Updated Chapter-14 on Page 140 THREAD CLOSED - Page 70

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Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by: .AKDHASWARA.

awesomw update hope jalal changes soon continue soon

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thankew swara...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by: ...Shefa...


🤔 don't know...just feel it

aww koi naa jaan...😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by: shruthikarthik

Awesome banner neetu...perfectly fits for the storyline

I am so happy for jodha 😃her newly found friendship with Arth😆
At the same worried too.. how will Jalal reacts for this😡
Do continue soon😳

thankew didu...
No threat today yippee😃...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by: sharmacatty

All in one Go..😊 Very interesting story neetu.. Just loved this devil jalal😆 waiting to see jealous jalal now.. So plz update soon next chapter.. Waiting dear😊

thankew dear...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by: avika444

Nice update monu
arth is such a sweet friend
omg they hugged each other and jalal saw then
ayyo what will happen now
update soon pls

thankew avi didu...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by: Monucute

aww koi naa jaan...😊


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Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by: RSlovesJA

Omg jalal caught jodha hugging arth.. continue soon

thankew di
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Posted: 8 years ago


...Chapter - 10...

He
smiled and
wrapped his arms
around her...
Oblivious to a pair
of eyes...
The spectator to came in view coughed a little to gain the attention...
"ahem... Ahem" both became alert to their surroundings and parted... Looked at the spectator, it is a shadow, as the shadow came into light both looked at each other... Before anyone could utter something , the spectator jumped in between and told in a passive tone "its not a lovers point..."
he does not waited for some reply and stromed off... Arth ran behind him and caught his shoulder... "sorry kaka... She is just a friend" arth pacified to the middle aged watch-man... He smiled and shook his head... Walked off from there giving arth a look of "like. I. Don't. Know."... Arth returned to jodha and bid adieu to each other...
Jodha waited him to go then she picked her bags and headed towards back door... It was a narrow staircase... She anyhow reached to her room... And dumped all the bags on floor and switched on his phone torch... She had charged her mobile at cafe where they had chatted for 1 hour or probably more...
She started to arrange her thing in that room... Suddenly a knock at door... She opened it to find jalal standing there with a killer smirk... And the next moment she got pinned to wall... He softly pecked corner of her lips and started to kiss her... Bitted a bit roughly on her lip and blood came out... He parted
"you know, your blood tastes good..." She was breathless and looking at him horror filled eyes...
"tmrw my friends are coming... They want to meet you" he said in a husky voice... Chills ran down her spine... He smirked and left from there... She knows something bad gonna happen...

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Posted: 8 years ago
I will kill jalal...such a horrible person
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Posted: 8 years ago
nw what is jalal upto..? nice update...