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Posted: 8 years ago
Oho wow dear awsum hai!!!
lov d title majja aaya!!!
wow cavya wedding!!!
YAY!!!
jaldi uodate karna n update ur parenthood ff 2 pls!!!
lov u Aresha
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Posted: 8 years ago
ok starting with the title it was awesome..
cavya yes!!😃
I so want cavya to happen..
U depicted their uniqueness too nicely.
Continue asap and do pm me.
thanks for pm btw😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
Yay, another Cavya story from you!
Please continue this story.
And PM me when you update.
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Posted: 8 years ago
interesting continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Really nice..
Con. ..soon ..
Waiting for next chp...
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Posted: 8 years ago
awesome...!!! loved it
nice title...!!!!
continue soon...thanks a lot for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
Interesting story and start..
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Posted: 8 years ago
I love all their scenes together 
But I don't ship them but if I could I would
They are one weird and awesome pair 
They don't make sense but at the same time they do

I am very excited how you will put them TOGEHTER together 
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Posted: 8 years ago
loved the title seethu..
its different...
continue soon...
p.s- i too love them..they are so adorable together..😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: 8seetha

Something new but on my crush Kabira. I love him so much. A different story with fun but also sad moments. Do u want it? Let me introduce and remember them. Why I love them so much? 



The most strange couple who can exist I mean our Kabir and Navya.

One is gay and the other is pregnant. So how can the relation work?

In the beginning he was here to defend her against two machos. 

Then he just couldn't tolerate a lady on his world, on his flat.

But she came and took her place like it's her own home.

They fought each other but also against others. 

He understood her feels like no one else. 

He only can tease her because she is his Madhubala.

Her new gestures to hug or hold him were shocked but not displaced.

No one can approach her like that. Issliye he was agree without her consent to accept her as his wife only a kind man can do that. 

He felt something in his life is missing and who of course his madhubala. He run to her and asked for forgiveness. But still he knew something bothered her, he holds her hand. It's like that no one can be between them.

Even if he was drunk he told the truth about his step on their  nakli  shaadi. First she was shocked but after she satisfied herself because she knew that he was the right one. 

Her strange tradition to tie a knot and asked god for something, made his stunned. But it's her unique charm too.

His acceptance meant a lot to her for asking a permission.

Their fought are so tremendous, like really, even for keys he listened all her words. 


Kavya in the room.


Kabir : Even mom is here. Shit yaar!


Navya : What will we do know?


Kabir : Don't take stress in your condition just let talk to them.


They step in the hall. They sit far from each other.


Navya's mom : Damaad don't be shy sit with ur wife. We will not mind, hai naa behenji? 


Kabir's mom : Ji haan.


Kabir sits closely to Navya.


Navya's mom : Today it will your engagement, tomorrow with your friend small sangeeth and next day shaadi.


Navya : No we can't itni jaldi.


Kabir holds her hand : It's ok we are fine with it.


Kabir's mom suspected something fishy : Really?


Kabir : Of course if we are ready to marry so why we are waiting the time?


Navya is shocked. 

Navya's mom : So let start by the engagement. 


She tends to them two rings. 


Kabir made her to wear it, after Navya.


Two mothers are happy. They take their blessing.


Kabir : We have to leave.


Kabir's mom : Where?


Kabir : To see others. 


He takes Navya's hand and leave from here.


Navya stops him : What's happening Kabir?


Kabir : Nothing just chill.


Navya : Are you sure to marry me? I mean it will take time for divorce and all. 


Kabir : It's ok I can manage. The most important it's that our mom leave from here. 


Navya : Ok but how we will announce it to others?


Kabir : Let me tell them.


They exit from here for the court.



How is it cutties? Sorry if I am boring u.