FF : her Devil and his Madhubala chap 3 page 5

Posted: 8 years ago

Something new but on my crush Kabira. I love him so much. A different story with fun but also sad moments. Do u want it? Let me introduce and remember them. Why I love them so much? 



The most strange couple who can exist I mean our Kabir and Navya.

One is gay and the other is pregnant. So how can the relation work?

In the beginning he was here to defend her against two machos. 

Then he just couldn't tolerate a lady on his world, on his flat.

But she came and took her place like it's her own home.

They fought each other but also against others. 

He understood her feels like no one else. 

He only can tease her because she is his Madhubala.

Her new gestures to hug or hold him were shocked but not displaced.

No one can approach her like that. Issliye he was agree without her consent to accept her as his wife only a kind man can do that. 

He felt something in his life is missing and who of course his madhubala. He run to her and asked for forgiveness. But still he knew something bothered her, he holds her hand. It's like that no one can be between them.

Even if he was drunk he told the truth about his step on their  nakli  shaadi. First she was shocked but after she satisfied herself because she knew that he was the right one. 

Her strange tradition to tie a knot and asked god for something, made his stunned. But it's her unique charm too.

His acceptance meant a lot to her for asking a permission.

Their fought are so tremendous, like really, even for keys he listened all her words. 


Kavya in the room.


Kabir : Even mom is here. Shit yaar!


Navya : What will we do know?


Kabir : Don't take stress in your condition just let talk to them.


They step in the hall. They sit far from each other.


Navya's mom : Damaad don't be shy sit with ur wife. We will not mind, hai naa behenji? 


Kabir's mom : Ji haan.


Kabir sits closely to Navya.


Navya's mom : Today it will your engagement, tomorrow with your friend small sangeeth and next day shaadi.


Navya : No we can't itni jaldi.


Kabir holds her hand : It's ok we are fine with it.


Kabir's mom suspected something fishy : Really?


Kabir : Of course if we are ready to marry so why we are waiting the time?


Navya is shocked. 

Navya's mom : So let start by the engagement. 


She tends to them two rings. 


Kabir made her to wear it, after Navya.


Two mothers are happy. They take their blessing.


Kabir : We have to leave.


Kabir's mom : Where?


Kabir : To see others. 


He takes Navya's hand and leave from here.


Navya stops him : What's happening Kabir?


Kabir : Nothing just chill.


Navya : Are you sure to marry me? I mean it will take time for divorce and all. 


Kabir : It's ok I can manage. The most important it's that our mom leave from here. 


Navya : Ok but how we will announce it to others?


Kabir : Let me tell them.


They exit from here for the court.



How is it cutties? Sorry if I am boring u.  

Edited by 8seetha - 8 years ago
Posted: 8 years ago
 i loved your title i dont read ff 's while i writing one myself will sure check your when mine is over
Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by naddiya26


 i loved your title i dont read ff 's while i writing one myself will sure check your when mine is over


no problem you can do it after when u have time. 
Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by SONIAGHOSH


nice start continue soon


Ty I will
Posted: 8 years ago
Nice,great title n great start too.do continue soon and pls pm me tooo
Posted: 8 years ago
kya title hai
I was waiting for some one to write on cavya and U fulfilled my wish thanks di!!
Cont soon
Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by sherma


Nice,great title n great start too.do continue soon and pls pm me tooo

ty I will 
Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by Dhariya_


kya title hai
I was waiting for some one to write on cavya and U fulfilled my wish thanks di!!
Cont soon


ty baby everyone ask my my fan page to start so hope I will not deceive 
Posted: 8 years ago
Nice start
Title sounds awesome 

Put me on the pm list 
Continue soon 
Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by urvisaini


Nice start
Title sounds awesome 

Put me on the pm list 
Continue soon 


I put u check ur pm box ty 


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