Kaisi Yeh Yaariaan

FF : her Devil and his Madhubala chap 3 page 5

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Posted: 8 years ago

Something new but on my crush Kabira. I love him so much. A different story with fun but also sad moments. Do u want it? Let me introduce and remember them. Why I love them so much? 



The most strange couple who can exist I mean our Kabir and Navya.

One is gay and the other is pregnant. So how can the relation work?

In the beginning he was here to defend her against two machos. 

Then he just couldn't tolerate a lady on his world, on his flat.

But she came and took her place like it's her own home.

They fought each other but also against others. 

He understood her feels like no one else. 

He only can tease her because she is his Madhubala.

Her new gestures to hug or hold him were shocked but not displaced.

No one can approach her like that. Issliye he was agree without her consent to accept her as his wife only a kind man can do that. 

He felt something in his life is missing and who of course his madhubala. He run to her and asked for forgiveness. But still he knew something bothered her, he holds her hand. It's like that no one can be between them.

Even if he was drunk he told the truth about his step on their  nakli  shaadi. First she was shocked but after she satisfied herself because she knew that he was the right one. 

Her strange tradition to tie a knot and asked god for something, made his stunned. But it's her unique charm too.

His acceptance meant a lot to her for asking a permission.

Their fought are so tremendous, like really, even for keys he listened all her words. 


Kavya in the room.


Kabir : Even mom is here. Shit yaar!


Navya : What will we do know?


Kabir : Don't take stress in your condition just let talk to them.


They step in the hall. They sit far from each other.


Navya's mom : Damaad don't be shy sit with ur wife. We will not mind, hai naa behenji? 


Kabir's mom : Ji haan.


Kabir sits closely to Navya.


Navya's mom : Today it will your engagement, tomorrow with your friend small sangeeth and next day shaadi.


Navya : No we can't itni jaldi.


Kabir holds her hand : It's ok we are fine with it.


Kabir's mom suspected something fishy : Really?


Kabir : Of course if we are ready to marry so why we are waiting the time?


Navya is shocked. 

Navya's mom : So let start by the engagement. 


She tends to them two rings. 


Kabir made her to wear it, after Navya.


Two mothers are happy. They take their blessing.


Kabir : We have to leave.


Kabir's mom : Where?


Kabir : To see others. 


He takes Navya's hand and leave from here.


Navya stops him : What's happening Kabir?


Kabir : Nothing just chill.


Navya : Are you sure to marry me? I mean it will take time for divorce and all. 


Kabir : It's ok I can manage. The most important it's that our mom leave from here. 


Navya : Ok but how we will announce it to others?


Kabir : Let me tell them.


They exit from here for the court.



How is it cutties? Sorry if I am boring u.  

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 i loved your title i dont read ff 's while i writing one myself will sure check your when mine is over
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