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NiBir OS ~ Aashique 2

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Posted: 08 May 2015 at 1:11am | IP Logged
Hii to all the new members of this forum Big smileBig smile...and how r u all to the old members...hope u hvn't forgotten me...i was the first member 2 write a story in this NAUC forum... i'm really srry 4 not being online 4 soo many days...i'm here wid a new os...pls read nd give me ur valuable suggestions...
NiBir Os ~ Aashique 2
1day b4 kabir returning 2 London!
*****
Kabir was worried...
Talking 2 himself - aaj kal pata nahin nisha ko kya hua hai...Hamesha ajeeb se ghurti hai mujhe...aur jab main London jaane ki baath karta hoon toh kabhi dukhi hojathi hai ya phir koi bahaana banaake chali jaati hai...
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Nisha was walking through the roads...she was day dreaming about kabir...
Thinking in her mind(mujhe toh pata hi nahin chala kab mujhe kabir se pyaar hogaya...lekin...kabir toh parso London chala jaaega... Main usse rok bhi toh nahin sakta... Agar roka bhi toh kis haq se...) 
While thinking all this she didn't realise that she had gone 2 the middle of the road...that time a truck was cmng...the driver was drunk and was half conscious...
Kabir was passing by...
Kabir (shouting) - nishaaa...truck aaraha hai...nishaaa...
Nisha woke up frm her daydream...she was shocked...the truck was cmng in full speed...
Kabir (now half crying) - nishaaa
Kabir ran 2 her...
Kabir - nisha aankhein kholo...pls nisha...
Nisha was unconscious...
******
At the hospital...
Nisha was in the operation theatre...
Kabir outside... With saurav nd Nisha's cousins...they hadn't informed Nisha's parents nd others...they thought after DR's cm out of the operation theatre, they'll inform them.
Kabir - ye meri galati hai...agar maine waqt pe nisha ko bacha Liya hota toh ye sab nahin hota... Sab meri galati hai
Saurav - yaar kabir...khud ko kyun dosh de rahe ho...ye kisiki bhi galati nahin hai...kisiko kya pata tha ki nishu ke saath esa Kuch hoga...aur agar tumne nishu ko sahin samay par hospital nahin laaya hota...toh pata nahin kya hota!
Jwaala - haan jiju...isme aapki koi galati nahin...bhalki aapne toh nishu bro ko bachaya hai.
DR's came out...
Umesh - kya hua Dr? Operation theek se hua na? Nishu theek hai na?
Dr - ji...aap shaant hojaayiye...patient ka kaafi khoon nikal gaya hai...isiliye voh thodi kamzor hai...isiliye usko injection di gayi hai...kuch hi samay main unhe hosh aajayega...tab aap unse mil sakte hai
Umesh - ji theek hai
Kabir - Dr nisha ko kuch hua toh nahin...voh poori tara se theek hai na?
Dr - ji haan...sirf thodi si kamzori hai...aur kuch nahin
Kabir - ok...thnx
****
After half an hr.
Nisha gained her consciousness...
Nisha (whispering) - ka...kabir...ka...ka...kabir...
Nurse - ji? Aapko kuch chahiye?
Nisha (talking softly) - ka...ka...kabir...
Nurse - kabir? Aapko kabir se Milna hai? Ek min...
Nurse went out...
Nurse - ji yahan kabir kaun hai? 
Kabir - ji...main hoon kabir! Kya hua?
Nurse - voh patient ko hosh aaya hai...aur aapko bula rahi hai
Kabir goes inside
****
Kabir goes near Nisha's bed nd sits beside her... She tries 2 sit up...
Kabir - nahin nahin...nisha tum leti raho...Dr ne kahan hai ki tum kamzor ho...vese bhi patli ho aur kamzor thi...ab aur kamzor hogayi... Sadak pe sapna dekh ke koi chalta hai kya...
Nisha was staring at kabir wid luv...
Kabir - kuch bolo bhi...ghoor ghoor ke kyun dekh rahi ho?
Nisha - ka...kabir...mu...mujhe...tumse...kuch...ke...kehana hai...
Kabir - haan...kaho...
Nisha (taking deep breath) - main...tu...tumse...py...pyaar karthi...hoon...kabir...main jaanti hoon ki London...huh...huh...school of...dance tumhara...
She was cut in BTW by kabir...
Kabir (keeping his finger on her lips) - shh...London school of dance mera sapna hai...aur uske auditions pe agar Mai select hua hoon...toh voh sirf tumhari vajah se...aur nisha...mai aaj tak bohot ladkiyon se mila hoon...par...tum...tum un sab se alag ho...nisha...main bhi tumse pyaar karta hoon...meri zindagi ki har ek pal main tumhare saath share karna chahtha hoon...I luv u nisha...
Hearing all dis, tears started developing in her eyes...kabir wiped her tears...nisha tried sitting up...kabir, this time, helped her...nisha hugged Kabir...wid all the luv, passion nd care...kabir too hugged her back...
Nd like this they confessed their luv for each other in a heart touching way...
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Edited by evanna_rocks - 08 May 2015 at 1:12am

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nice one!
do write more!

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Posted: 08 May 2015 at 1:24am | IP Logged
awesome dear Clap

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Posted: 08 May 2015 at 1:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by anulovessarun

nice one!
do write more!

Thnk u...uhm...u new 2 the forum?? if yes...wats ur name...my name is evanna!!Big smile
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Originally posted by nedhvik-91

awesome dear Clap

thnk u soo much...Star
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Posted: 08 May 2015 at 1:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by evanna_rocks

Originally posted by anulovessarun

nice one!
do write more!

Thnk u...uhm...u new 2 the forum?? if yes...wats ur name...my name is evanna!!Big smile
i came to the forum after kabir's entry...
i am anagha
u can call me anuBig smile

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Posted: 08 May 2015 at 1:34am | IP Logged
beautiful os ClapThumbs Up... please write more on NiBirSmile...

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Posted: 08 May 2015 at 6:27am | IP Logged
Awww ! That was such a beautifully written OS ! :')
Btw, I'm Vedika ! I'm new to the forum. Joined after Kabir's entry ! Embarrassed

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