Yaayyy!!! You gave us such a surprise with an unexpected early update π
And WOW!!! What a Wicked Game!!! Such beautiful update again ππΌ... What an amazing 'dawn of revelations'!! Seriously... This was so dramatic, thrilling & full of angst!! I'm lost for words! π
How Aahil decided to cope with all the mess is... well, it's exactly how Aahil Raza Ibrahim would have done (if you know what I mean) π... Again, you've done full justice to the characters...
Rehan is there by his side in spite of how the truth has come out... Yes, Rehan was always there for Aahil, no matter what... Trying to make Sanam understand that his Aahil bhai is not how he seems to be π³
And Asad's reaction... well, the protective father as usual...π
The Starry Night theme... The way you've described it in all details is really beautiful β€οΈ... The wires mimicking falling stars... I could actually visualize it all...π
Sanam's mind has been working on the mystery all through the party... They had to figure it out some way or the other π*sigh*
Aahil's cold demeanor... He must be hurting so much deep inside π... How he couldn't say or do anything when Lateef was shoving off Sanam downstairs...
Their eyes met for a moment, and he resolutely turned them away to gaze out into the crowd... *jaw dropped*
"How could you hide it from me?" she silently yelled at him. "How could you?"
He gazed silently at her, his eyes sparking as if he had heard her silent yells. He looked at only her when he spoke those next words, as if the next revelation was just for her. π² *Sanam: Please tell me what I'm thinking is wrong π*
Their eyes met once more as he moved through the crowd. He gazed at her quietly as he strode closer, but his eyes said nothing. They were calm pools, allowing no emotion to shine through. He grew closer and closer, and Sanam stiffened at that proximity. But then he was moving past, her, without saying one word, and striding up the stairs.
"Khuda hafiz, meri Jaan."π₯Ί
I bet he must have said that in his mind though his eyes never revealed it...
You've written a truly wonderful part ππΌ π€... I hope things clear up soon between the Khans & the Nawab making way for a happy reunion π
Eagerly waiting for the next part... Pleeeaaase do update very soon π
Originally posted by: Booteefool
Also, good to know that you have written stories on ManEet, don't know many Geet fans here lol.
If time and life allows, I will also be reading those. π
And just out of curiosity, have you written anything on ArShi? When I guess I should've asked if you seen IPKKND first?
I would also be interested in reading ArShi stories as well, if you have written anything on them.
I'm being honest that I felt as nervous as Sanam! You showed the emotions wonderfully! Amazing! The confession we have been waiting for was amazing! π I don't know where to start. I loved how Asad's anger was portrayed and Zoya's cheeriness. The way Sanam slowly started figuring it out, how Lateef basically gave it away (leave it to "chui mui" to mess up everything). π You had a couple riddles in there too.
"The truth is often in the picture, right? Can't deny it. I'm sure the public will appreciate pictures of what their mayor is doing to protect their interests. Even if it's at this person's home."
That was great... I honestly meant it when I said I felt as nervous as Sanam. I don't know how you do this but you manage to put in so much excitement in every part! Now I'm guessing SaHil is giving up on each other, but obviously they will unite soon. Will you stop this after they unite or will you be able to continue it soon? π³The plot is very interesting and I'm pretty sure the upcoming parts are fantastic too! I'd say that overall, having AsYa in the story made it even EVEN better. I can't wait for the next chapter! I reread this a couple times just because it was so... I don't know what to say... exciting? Climatic? I have no words to describe how fun it was to read this chapter.
Update whenever you can! β€οΈ π
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