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SaRun.

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Posted: 8 years ago

You updated finally i was waiting for this one and what an update it was! Loved it absolutely. You writing is amazing! There's humour as well as emotions and im loving the combination <3

Continue soonish :)

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Sobia

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Posted: 8 years ago

Nice ff

Looking forward

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533840

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Posted: 8 years ago

simply amazing
loved it.

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hotchic.

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Posted: 8 years ago

The story is fantastic!😃

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1likeNoOther

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Posted: 8 years ago

Just caught up with this story and it is great! Really looking forward to reading the rest of the story 😊

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SS88

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Posted: 8 years ago

Hello, Risha, welcome back on IF . How are you doing?

What a chapter! This is why we must be careful with our words. All the little things we say, however unintentionally, strain our relationships. Maybe forever. Look at Payal and Khushi. A thoughtless remark by an aunt undermined Payal's confidence her whole life. Another by her sister may have possibly strained an already damaged relationship. I hope they're able to cross these hurdles and get close. And two words was all it took for Arnav to halt Khushi's progress on the road to recovery. Just two words. But I'm glad he didn't wallow in her grief and gave back as good as she got. So Akash has a thing for Payal. Interesting.

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853902

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Posted: 8 years ago

Nice start

Love it

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bmtdluver

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IF-Rockerz

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

Great update. Arnav's remark was most definitely out of line, especially considering that people handle grief and loss differently. As for Khushi, she momentarily reverted to her old self, only to be scorned for the instance of joy. I'm interested in seeing how the story progresses. Hopefully Payal and Khushi can work on building a better relationship, with Payal gaining more self confidence.

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javeria

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IF-Rockerz

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

very emotional update

what would have been the taste of the cake, which khushi was chewing when Arnav judge her actions by making fun of her loss, worst than the poison. That scene was most sad.

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