[AK] SS : Chandaniya. |UPDATE Chapter One| Pge 5| 5 July - Page 2

You name your New short story after one of the most endearing songs. And. And. I come back to IF to read it.

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The insecurity and jealousy that Payal felt was very well put. It happens all too often to many of us. And to bring that out in such simple words was amazing! I felt so bad for Khushi, widowed at such a young age. Waiting to see how Arnav enters her life and brings the old Khushi back again... 

Exciting concept this is. I don't remember the last time I read something on these lines. By the way I am very curious about the title... 

Do continue soon 😊

Loved it

I really feel bad for Kushi... cant wait to know who can Arnav reach kushi and their journey...