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Asya Os: That One Gesture

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Posted: 07 May 2015 at 3:20pm | IP Logged
Hii everyone.
How are you guys?
I am back with an OS i know my exams are going and because of them i hve not update my story for almost 1 month and you guys want them. Not all but few want so thought of giving a OS. It is a bit lame but i hope you ll like it if not than no juttis and chappals are welcomed LOL. This OS is random completely different from the show.
Thanks to my all time partner Yashika for helping me as always. Luv uh yar.Hug
Ok so starting with the OS plz do read a  small introduction to know their nature and all.

               Asya OS: That One Gesture

Laibaa- chal na yar kuch nhi hoga. Dekh agar yeh train miss hui toh hum class ke liye late ho jayenge.
Zoya- par yar agar TT ne pakad lia toh fine lag jayega and abbu datenge yar.
Laibaa- yar mere abbu ne kaha hai na ki sunday ko pass chalta hai toh chal. Ab chal bas.
And they entered the train.

They were going for their coaching in Delhi for CAT(Common Admission test). Zoya didnt took the ticket and now she was worried what if TT ask for ticket and fine will be there and her abbu will scold her.
They entered the train and in tension she stood with a boy very closely, she didnt noticed as she was hell scared.
Laibaa- i am telling you kuch nahi hoga.
Zoya was not convinced so she asked from Laibaa's abbu and asked. He confirned and told her that passes are valid on sunday for shatabdi. 
She was now relieved. It is then when she noticed this guy and saw him, they both were standing so close and noone stepped back. She noticed him pfoperly he was looking in his mobile and smiling.
Zoya in her mind- leave zoya i think he is committed.
She than started listening songs and talking to laibaa. A baby was sitting with his grandparents. He was constantly holding zoya's shirt trying to grab her attention.
Zoya looking at him- aww baby. Hii. How are you? She started playing with him. She also placed a kiss on his cheek and hugged him. After 5-10 mins she gave the baby back to his grandparents.
She started talking to laibaa and again tht baby holding her Jean's belt, sometimes her finger. 

Someone was noticing each every moment of this girl. He thought. Wow this girl is so pretty, but why she is sad. He pretend that he is chatting with someone on mobile but he was listening to their convo. Oh so she is scared tht TT will put fine on her. Aww she is damm cute.
Haw this naughty kid touching her, he is so lucky Allah. He saw how cutely she was playing with that kid. God i like her. We are standing so close, for the first time i am standing this close to a girl and i dont mind the proximity.

1 hour of travelling came to an end. And we both came out, she was in hurry so disappeared.

That boy was waiting for that girl on station only because that girl talked to her friend that they ll catch the train arriving at 2 pm. So for 3 hours he waited and roam near by places and was there back at station 15 mins before.
Zoya- laibaa kuch bhi keh that boy was cute kash kuch der or hum train mein rehte.
Laibaa- kya fayda tune hi kaha that he was talking to someone 
Zoya with a sad face- yeah. Chalo koi ni lets go fast we have to catch the train
They took sweet corn from outside station and went to station.
They were standing when zoya's eyes landed on a boy.
Zoya- laibaa- see the same guy. Oh my God yeh toh chala gaya tha toh ab yaha kaise?
Laibaa- dont know. Its a coincidence atleast for once try your luck and usi dabbe mein chadna jisme vo chade. Aur kuch nahi toh kuch tym sath hi mil jayega vo.
Zoya- ya. But i ll not initiate any conversation.
Laibaa- ok baba.

That boy thought. Yay she came, oh my God she saw me. I hope she dont think bad about me. Now i ll not follow her,if she ll take any step than i ll think of something.
Train came and he went inside. Zoya and laibaa too followed them.
That boy was happy that she also came in same box but because of some boys she had to go to other box which was interconnected.

Zoya went to other box but je was standing there only.
Zoya irritated- laibaa he is standing there only. He is just not interested.
Laibaa- ab tu bhi mat dhyan de.
But next moment only that boy came to there box he was standing near the box, and zoya and laibaa were standing at the end of box so they both had full clear view of eachother.
Zoya was eating that corns and that boy was admiring her.
In whole way they were stealing glances but no proper eye contacts were made.
Laibaa- chal aane vala hai.
Zoya- 15 mins pade hai pata nahi kyu itna jaldi chalti hai.
And they both stood near the door with that boy, boy was in between door and zoya.
Door was open so wind was blowing.
Laibaa- dhyaan rakhio ud mat jaio tu zoya.
 Zoya- nahi udti.
The moment she said this asad jept his hand on pole protecting her zoya saw this. She was happy with that mere gesture, that mere gesture took her heart. 

Boy thought- oh so her name is zoya beautiful name. I will not let her fall.
For the first time in this journey she talked to him.
Zoya to boy- excuse me. Mujhe door ke paas khade hona hai.
Laibaa- zoya plz dont.
Zoya- plz na laibaa main dhyan rakhungi plz mujhe bas ek bar dekhna hai chalti train se bahar 
Laibaa- ok but be careful.
Zoya- ha ok.

Boy unwillingly gave her the space but he was alert and observing her moves.
Zoya held the pole and looked out, as soon as she brought her face out a pole came and she was about to hit that but on time she was pulled in. And got scolded that too from the boy.
Boy- pagal ho? Apna dhyan nahi rakh sakti?
Kuch ho jata toh?
Zoya was scared- i am sorry.
Laibaa- tu thik toh hai na?
Zoya to boy- thanks for saving my life.
Boy- its ok. And he again stood with door like pillar protecting her.
There station came and they got down.
Zoya gave one last look at that boy and saw him already looking at her direction. Noone has the guts to talk. Zoya left from there and train too started and boy too left.
Zoya and that boy was in thiughts of eachother.
Boy thought. Agar use kuch ho jata toh? God she is driving me crazy. Allah knows ki main use dobara mil bhi paunga ke nahi.

Here zoya was also  thinking about him. I cant understand how can someone's one gesture take my heart. The way he pritected me and saved my life. I cant come our of it.
3-4 days passed and they both had only them in their thoughts.
Zoya's Ammi- zoya beta ready ho jao hume aaj abbu ke kiso friend ke ghar jana hai.
Zoya- ammi i am not in a mood. Jana zaruri hai kya?
Ammi- yes beta.
Zoya- ok. She got up to get ready.

Zoya and her family arrived at his father's friend's house.
Uncle and aunty greeted them. They both exchanged Salaam's

They all were sitting in living area.
Zoya's abbu- so where is your son rizwan?
Rizwan- yahi tha. Lo here he come.
And all saw in the direction.
That boy greeted everyone, but as soon as he saw zoya he was shocked zoya was also shocked to see him.
Boy- hii i am asad.
Zoya- hi am zoya.
They both sat with there parents.
They both cant believe that Allah listened there prayers, they both kept on glancing at eachother.
Asad's mom was preparing food in kitchen and zoya's mom was helping her.
Both the ftgers and children were in living area.
Zoya was sipping her drink when accidentally she spilled it on herself.
Zoya- oh. Uncle where is washroom?
Rizwan- asad show her the way beta 
Asad- yes abbu.

They went. Asad waited outside. 
Zoya came out.
Asad- its clean now?
Zoya- ya.
Asad- actually I am sorry for shouting at you on that day.
Zoya- its ok. Vaise what a coincidence na
Asad- yes i never thought that we ll meet again.
Zoya- me too. Lets go all will be waiting for us.
Asad- yes sure.

They all had dinner, Asya were stealing glances at eachother. Non
Both wanted to exchange their numbers but couldn't ask as now the situation was different there parents were friends. So they dropped the idea.


Next Saturday zoya and laibaa went to there class, they were 5mins early. So entered the class 
What zoya saw shocked her to the core.
Asad was sitting there. As he saw her they both asked in unison.
Asya- tum yaha?
Zoya- ya yeh meri coaching class hai.
Asad- i too joined actually i was late. God what a coincidence.
Laibaa wispered in zoya's ear- kya bat hai lucky girl. Chal tu bat kar me going.
They both sat together and talked till the class started.
They both were happy to know that now they can be in contact.

With passage of days they get to know eachother and started spending time with eachother.

On one fine day asad proposed zoya.
Asad- zoya i love you from the day i first saw you. Will you be my girlfriend?
Zoya- you know your one gesture took my heart that day. I love you too.

And they both hugged.

The End.

So how was it?
For me it was not that goodUnhappy
Bye good night.
Take care.
Love Vish Heart

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-ABI- IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 07 May 2015 at 3:32pm | IP Logged

Edited by -ABI- - 08 May 2015 at 3:54am
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Posted: 07 May 2015 at 9:11pm | IP Logged
woww lovely os dear wonderful
thanxx for the pm
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asyaarshilover IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 07 May 2015 at 9:37pm | IP Logged
Maggie Hug
how is u??

wow an os...it's so sweet
i loved the title firstly 
concept was Awesome and cute

and i really like laiba...such a great friend she is...Embarrassed
beautiful... asya are justDay Dreaming

and how are tour exams going on..?

do write more Big smile
thanks for pm
Shailu.. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 07 May 2015 at 10:11pm | IP Logged
So lovely os love their sence's
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Posted: 07 May 2015 at 10:14pm | IP Logged
very nice
thanx for pm
asifiqbalsh IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 07 May 2015 at 10:23pm | IP Logged
That's lovely OS dear
Thanks for pm
Gulaabo IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 07 May 2015 at 10:39pm | IP Logged
light hearted cute os
exams k beech mein tera dimag train ki ser pe chala gaya ;-)

happy to see you back with a bang!!

write more...me waiting!

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