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Akya FF ~Chupke se sun iss pal ki dhoon~ Last chapter page 22 (Page 2)

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Posted: 08 May 2015 at 12:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Paulomi-

Originally posted by Anzum505

Originally posted by -Paulomi-

First of all you should always take are of the title and it should be catchy enough to depict the whole plot of your story.

Second I hope it won't be like ANANYA'S DIARIES.

Abhi kuch zyada nehi bolungi pehle story progress hone do.



I know di the title is not good but I can't change it.. there is a reason. .

nd dii it will be different from ananya's diary. . don't worry. . . I promise you that. .

nd I will my best to make the past time different from the show...

no maine ye nehi kaha hai ke title is not so good of course agar tune diya hai to kuch soch kar hi diya hoga maine ek general suggestion di hai



I know di. . nd meant ke jyada suit nehi karta as a ff name. . u plz have faith on me.. I'll try write well. .

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Posted: 08 May 2015 at 12:26am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Princessnidhii

hello apuni
firstly i wanna tell you that i am very happy that you have started to write your first ff. I am a very big fan of your writing and i am looking forward to read all your updates :) i can't tell you the happiness i felt when i saw the link of this ff in our group. After so long time, you are writing something and this is so heart warming. I know you are nervous coz its your best ff but i am sure that u will do pretty well and will write a beautiful story coz i have full trust on my apuni & her writings
So i wanna wish you all the bestSmilemay you shine bright my dearSmile

I like the concept a lot. Its quite promising. but its kind of repetitive. many friends have already written stories based of similar storyline. now its upon you to make your story original & interesting which i am sure you will surely do. I would also suggest you that in future updates, do not keep writing about the pasts only. From time to time, do write about the present condition too. I am expecting a brilliant story from you coz i know how good writer you r.

please dont mind i am telling dear but the title is very confusing. Its not easy to understand. I do not know about others but at least for me, its tough. Title should be more eye catching and simple to understand. i understand it means' listen quietly to the tune of this moment 'but it could have been something more expressive towards this storyline

all the best dear for the story. Update soon
Wil be waiting for updates from you
U r the best apuni
I love the name avni for akya 's daughter..very cute name
i am happy that aakash has a very cute sis and her bonding is so good with Ananya
And i really appreciate that aakash & ananya r pilots.Smilei always adore those stories where the writer keeps akya as pilots coz for me, its the aviation industry itself who made this serial close to my heart





nidhi... tune to pura letter hi likh diya.. aur mujhe emotional bhi kar di..

I'll try my best to keep my promise. . nd I hope u all will like this.. finger crossed. .

and abt the name I can't change it. . There is a reason.. :)

and u know I also love those stories most qhere akya is pilot.. like palu di's HNRH..

nd past ke parts bht kaam honge yaha.. nd don't worry it will be a different story..

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Posted: 08 May 2015 at 12:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by zubiya92

Wow
Awesome update
Love it
Cont soon


thank you. .
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Posted: 08 May 2015 at 12:32am | IP Logged
Originally posted by akyabiggestfan

Congratulations on your first ff dearHugSmile
I've always loved all your stories and was jumping when I saw the author's nameBig smile...
Interesting plot!
love it.. I'm sure it's gonna be something really great to read...
Bichare akyaCryCry...
Akash has a daughter...
And a sister as well...hmmm...
Wo bhi apne bhaiyya ko miss kar rahi hai..
Awww!!!Cry
Mujhse anu ki ye haalat bardasht nahi hoti...plz jaldi much karoCry
And if possible please pm meBig smile




thank you so much dear. . For liking my stories. . it means a lot. .

great to pata nehi bt it's going to be a sad story. .

dear may be u r not on my buddy list. don't worry I'll pm u..

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Posted: 08 May 2015 at 12:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ...FRF...

Wow, Anzum di, the starting is amazing...Big smileBig smile..It was beautiful...And do continue soon...zyaada wait maat karwana...LOLLOL...And thnx for the pm...


thank you dear.. :)

and don't worry jyada wait nehi karwaungi.. I have to complete it asap...
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Posted: 08 May 2015 at 12:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Anzum505

Originally posted by akyabiggestfan

Congratulations on your first ff dearHugSmile
I've always loved all your stories and was jumping when I saw the author's nameBig smile...
Interesting plot!
love it.. I'm sure it's gonna be something really great to read...
Bichare akyaCryCry...
Akash has a daughter...
And a sister as well...hmmm...
Wo bhi apne bhaiyya ko miss kar rahi hai..
Awww!!!Cry
Mujhse anu ki ye haalat bardasht nahi hoti...plz jaldi much karoCry
And if possible please pm meBig smile




thank you so much dear. . For liking my stories. . it means a lot. .

great to pata nehi bt it's going to be a sad story. .

dear may be u r not on my buddy list. don't worry I'll pm u..
Awww! Thank you so so so much!Hug
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Posted: 08 May 2015 at 1:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Anzum505

Originally posted by ...FRF...

Wow, Anzum di, the starting is amazing...Big smileBig smile..It was beautiful...And do continue soon...zyaada wait maat karwana...LOLLOL...And thnx for the pm...


thank you dear.. :)

and don't worry jyada wait nehi karwaungi.. I have to complete it asap...
Thank you...Hug
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Posted: 08 May 2015 at 5:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Anzum505

Originally posted by Princessnidhii

hello apuni
firstly i wanna tell you that i am very happy that you have started to write your first ff. I am a very big fan of your writing and i am looking forward to read all your updates :) i can't tell you the happiness i felt when i saw the link of this ff in our group. After so long time, you are writing something and this is so heart warming. I know you are nervous coz its your best ff but i am sure that u will do pretty well and will write a beautiful story coz i have full trust on my apuni & her writings
So i wanna wish you all the bestSmilemay you shine bright my dearSmile

I like the concept a lot. Its quite promising. but its kind of repetitive. many friends have already written stories based of similar storyline. now its upon you to make your story original & interesting which i am sure you will surely do. I would also suggest you that in future updates, do not keep writing about the pasts only. From time to time, do write about the present condition too. I am expecting a brilliant story from you coz i know how good writer you r.

please dont mind i am telling dear but the title is very confusing. Its not easy to understand. I do not know about others but at least for me, its tough. Title should be more eye catching and simple to understand. i understand it means' listen quietly to the tune of this moment 'but it could have been something more expressive towards this storyline

all the best dear for the story. Update soon
Wil be waiting for updates from you
U r the best apuni
I love the name avni for akya 's daughter..very cute name
i am happy that aakash has a very cute sis and her bonding is so good with Ananya
And i really appreciate that aakash & ananya r pilots.Smilei always adore those stories where the writer keeps akya as pilots coz for me, its the aviation industry itself who made this serial close to my heart





nidhi... tune to pura letter hi likh diya.. aur mujhe emotional bhi kar di..

I'll try my best to keep my promise. . nd I hope u all will like this.. finger crossed. .

and abt the name I can't change it. . There is a reason.. :)

and u know I also love those stories most qhere akya is pilot.. like palu di's HNRH..

nd past ke parts bht kaam honge yaha.. nd don't worry it will be a different story..


i am sure u will write well dear. i have no doubt on this
i am sure that if you selected this title, there must be a reason for it. i am just telling my opinion my dr
waiting 4 the story Smile
God bless u apuni

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